it's good, make it longer though and try boostin somethin up like your vocab or more in depth of what story you're trying to tell
good message 8/10
What's To Come (Short)
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Re: What's To Come (Short)
by Urban Punk » Feb 24th, '09, 17:32
you know what... I really liked it the chorus was dope and your flow throughout the verse was spot on good work bro 8/10
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Re: What's To Come (Short)
by gutawafang » Feb 24th, '09, 17:35
Pretty good. I think the vocab was just FINE. Perfect for me. Cool. 
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Re: What's To Come (Short)
by rahul.never2far » Feb 24th, '09, 18:20
I liked it 
Keep it up 
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Re: What's To Come (Short)
by The GameKeeper » Feb 24th, '09, 21:58
that was good man... came straight from the heart bro.
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