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Freestyle-off the top and something new

Postby Wreck » Feb 24th, '09, 22:14

listen


alls I got is, one life to live
two mics to rip, shit motherfucker, I'm too nice for this
I tighten grips, I'm a titan- kid
I got my Mossburg, true Viking shit
If you bite down- to apply pressure
you ready to fight now- over my treasure
hip hop's golden era, Fitzgerald-Boldin era
bold ameri-ca, starts to fold in terror
So I keep a stop watch, before the clock's stop
listening to Pac- Doc., while the glock pops
live life a gram of madness, as I'm being handed sadness
new fads and fascists, tell me Michael- now who's the baddest?
so if I catch my breath- to slow down and breathe
you get it, understand it's change after I grow now, believe
I see- it's subtracting fear, retracting tears
adding here, facts to stear clear the madness, dear
Put up your fence and hide
(cause) now you feel suspensed inside
so you vent and cry
put up your own tent to die
but instead, you try to kill the hate off, with pesticide
it's the, eye of the tiger- you can't lie to get higher
in life, or rely on your peers or supplier
just wait for your chance to strive
it's exciting, unbelievable but crazy- so you can't deny
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Re: Freestyle-off the top and something new

Postby The GameKeeper » Feb 24th, '09, 22:24

This is tight man...

ShadyBaby8 wrote:hip hop's golden era, Fitzgerald-Boldin era
bold ameri-ca, starts to fold in terror
So I keep a stop watch, before the clock's stop
listening to Pac- Doc., while the glock pops
live life a gram of madness, as I'm being handed sadness
new fads and fascists, tell me Michael- now who's the baddest?


you should write more often...
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Re: Freestyle-off the top and something new

Postby Wreck » Feb 24th, '09, 22:26

The GameKeeper wrote:This is tight man...

ShadyBaby8 wrote:hip hop's golden era, Fitzgerald-Boldin era
bold ameri-ca, starts to fold in terror
So I keep a stop watch, before the clock's stop
listening to Pac- Doc., while the glock pops
live life a gram of madness, as I'm being handed sadness
new fads and fascists, tell me Michael- now who's the baddest?


you should write more often...


If that's a compliment- thank you. Yeah I should. I'm bad at freestyling but I was listening to beats over youtube and SC- freestyle type beats and started to generate some shit, and came out with that off the top. In actuality, I have a lot of material- just nothing recent due to computer problems.
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Re: Freestyle-off the top and something new

Postby Le Tunisien » Feb 24th, '09, 22:39

this freestly is actually good :y: keep it up and write more :smoking:
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Re: Freestyle-off the top and something new

Postby Wreck » Feb 25th, '09, 01:26

le tunisien wrote:this freestly is actually good :y: keep it up and write more :smoking:


Thanks. I appreciate it. Yeah I definitely will; good shit.

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Re: Freestyle-off the top and something new

Postby rahul.never2far » Feb 25th, '09, 02:38

Nice piece buddy

alls I got is, one life to live
two mics to rip, shit motherfucker, I'm too nice for this
I tighten grips, I'm a titan- kid
I got my Mossburg, true Viking shit

That was tight :y:
listening to Pac- Doc., while the glock pops

I'm ready to feel dumb but what does glock mean?? Or you meant clock??? :unsure:
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Re: Freestyle-off the top and something new

Postby gutawafang » Feb 25th, '09, 03:15

Great freestyle. Yeah, as said, write more. I loved it.

"I'm ready to feel dumb but what does glock mean?? Or you meant clock??? "
Glock is a weapon I think. It's like a pistol.
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Re: Freestyle-off the top and something new

Postby Wreck » Feb 26th, '09, 00:22

rahul.never2far wrote:Nice piece buddy

Thanks bro.

alls I got is, one life to live
two mics to rip, shit motherfucker, I'm too nice for this
I tighten grips, I'm a titan- kid
I got my Mossburg, true Viking shit

That was tight :y:

Thanks- good to hear.

listening to Pac- Doc., while the glock pops

I'm ready to feel dumb but what does glock mean?? Or you meant clock??? :unsure:


It's cool- yeah, a glock is a pistol. Thanks again for the feed.
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Re: Freestyle-off the top and something new

Postby Wreck » Feb 26th, '09, 00:24

gutawafang wrote:Great freestyle. Yeah, as said, write more. I loved it.

"I'm ready to feel dumb but what does glock mean?? Or you meant clock??? "
Glock is a weapon I think. It's like a pistol.


Thanks bro, glad you enjoyed it. I'll come with more later on to improve and showcase if I have talent or not, on here, definitely.

Yeah, glock and pistol are the same thing. A glock is a subdivision or form of a pistol.
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Re: Freestyle-off the top and something new

Postby Slim Zaddy » Feb 26th, '09, 08:50

very good freestyle , i enjoyed it .. flow is nice .. keep it up bro :worship:
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Re: Freestyle-off the top and something new

Postby Wreck » Feb 27th, '09, 06:51

z_em wrote:very good freestyle , i enjoyed it .. flow is nice .. keep it up bro :worship:



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