DFG - I'm Back =] [10 bars]

[dfg]

It's been a while since my last appearance
But now I've come back with vast perseverance
With more lyrics more vocab more witts and more skill
I'ma take over your mind like an ecstasy pill
Causing your buzz and your hallutionations
I'ma tear up the scene like a wars tribulation
I'm like a psycic mind reader misled
But like this is chess I'm always 1 step ahead
Where I'm in sync and I think what you think before it's said
And I say what you think as you say it in your head


As it says, it's been a while since I was last on this site so I thought I best do a few bars to show I'm still in the game and I ain't gonna back down to anoyone or quit this shit no matter what =]

Anyway would be much apriciated if you would rate this for me as you would if you was rating a rap battle.

FLOW - _/10
STRUCTURE - _/10
PUNCHES - _/10
MULTIES - _/10
RHYMES - _/10
VOCAB - _/10
COMPLEXITY - _/10
OTHER (State What)- _/10

[Steve Spag]

Pretty decent drop man. Loved the flow for it, sounded pretty nice as I rapped it out. Lyrics were nice, nothing too special, but that works fine. Rhyme-scheme was nice, and had some pretty cool multi's that stood out to me.

The ending was the best part in my opinion.

I'm like a psycic mind reader misled
But like this is chess I'm always 1 step ahead
Where I'm in sync and I think what you think before it's said
And I say what you think as you say it in your head

Very nicely written!

[Slim Zaddy]

FLOW - _ 9/10
STRUCTURE - _ 8/10
PUNCHES - _ 8.5/10
MULTIES - _ 9.5/10
RHYMES - _ 9/10
VOCAB - _ 8/10
COMPLEXITY - _ 8.5/10
OTHER (enjoyment , thug style)- _9 /10

it was a nice drop actually i enjoyed it , and i can see the skills ,, keep going buddy

[dfg]

Hey thanks guy, I appreciate it you know, I ain't been on here since I wrote that and even though it was only a few days ago I was expecting quite a lot of people to write back sayin its crap, but na, I go 2 pretty amazin comments there, thanks =D

[gutawafang]

Quite good. But first two lines didn't hook me. It threw me off actually.

Might as well I do it like how you want.


FLOW - 6/10
STRUCTURE - 9/10
PUNCHES - 3/10
MULTIES - 7/10
RHYMES - 8/10
VOCAB - 7/10
COMPLEXITY - 6/10