The Pain Is Deep

[rahul.never2far]

Earlier was basin' the skills I got, Now I'm acin'
I was listenin' to M&D Blendz's 'I keep Stressin'
Its a remix of the second verse of 'Like toy soldiers'
And wrote down the followin' 16 bars, Tried to conjure

I feel decieved, The world's not like the way it seems
I wish if everything could be the way I've dreamed
But thats how the life in this world goes I believe
They say my name, they see the composure I retrieved
They say call me insain, 'cause whatever I say is deep
Aint got no idea what I've been though, the pain is deep
I know its deep, but there's no need to shear my sleep
No mater its day or night, nobody see the tears I weep
When I open eyes wide, world is full of lies n lies
What the fuck is true? STill aint got a slight sight
Why Am I here? Thats what I'm STill tryin' to find
But the pain is deep, Seriously man I aint lyin'
The pressure is extreem, Its makin' my mind blind
Ready for whatever though, I keep stressin' my mind
But what's the point of expessin' my mind, further
When I'm going in one ear and I'm out of the other

Feed appreciated

[jigglinj]

pain... is deep in these puncture wounds in a bar fight

[Slim Zaddy]

wow ,, i really relate to this one ,, i loved it man ,, good emotions .. the best i hve seen from ya for me .. i dunno . cuz maybe as said ,, i'm related to it .. gd job here homie .. keep it up

[rahul.never2far]

Thanks

[gutawafang]

WOW. Great flow. I could rap it out man! Keep this up! I like your style man. It seems like you did spend time to write your rhymes before posting.

[rahul.never2far]

WOW. Great flow. I could rap it out man! Keep this up! I like your style man. It seems like you did spend time to write your rhymes before posting.

Thanks

[Rain Matrix]

da flow was noteable

[rahul.never2far]

da flow was noteable

Thanks for taking your time to read it