Yvonne

[gutawafang]

I tried to relax and recall some japanese
Every moment in here, I reminisce
Tears form lyrics, like feathers form phoenix
Beautifully expressed like some reborn stitches

One stanza jotted down, noted down like a speech recorded
On tape, then it leaks like a menstrual bitch retarded
Didn't expect to have projects left incomplete
Any moments, truths and facts left been forfeit

Shit, are these feelings natural or forced by the mind?
Is this true or non-factual and they tossed in a rhyme?
Do I have to cry? Like I'm fucking sad, deprived
I need a fucking map to guide the fucking madness inside

Torn apart, I feel as if my soul's depart
My fucking mind's retard, making a hole in heart
Needing a thread to sew it back, though it's black
Leaving a hurtful scar that marks permanently this fag

Thoughtful lies to conceal the butterflies in my stomach
My sorrowful cries give replies that starstruck
Causes us to connect, your brain's right, mine's left
Like a star explodes, no fucking shine's left

Episodes flash, recounting the days, black and white
Denotes trash, bouncing in faze, crack and light
My rhymes make the sky split if it was a shelter
Made of glass, when I spit, it affects the weather

Tales of me and you, dance like the sun and moon
Stories untold but true, as if they sung in tune
I need the key to lock our eyes when they meet
So that I'd be given a chance to confess cuz I need

My love for you could last longer than River Nile
Every rhyme a fucking crime to you, I'm juvenile
I visualize you accepting this rose I lyrically present
I fantasize you to love me back instead of resent

[Slim Zaddy]

Shit, are these feelings natural or forced by the mind?
Is this true or non-factual and they tossed in a rhyme?
Do I have to cry? Like I'm fucking sad, deprived
I need a fucking map to guide the fucking madness inside

Torn apart, I feel as if my soul's depart
My fucking mind's retard, making a hole in heart
Needing a thread to sew it back, though it's black
Leaving a hurtful scar that marks permanently this fag


My love for you could last longer than River Nile
Every rhyme a fucking crime to you, I'm juvenile
I visualize you accepting this rose I lyrically present
I fantasize you to love me back instead of resent

amazing man ,, i really loved these lines .. at first flow was off then it became great ,, rhymes and lyrics where there , i loved the concept too . but these are my best lines ,, flow is nice , i could sense the emotion flowing through the lines .. gd job here bro ..

[gutawafang]

Yvonne is great. LOL.

[gutawafang]

Anymore feeds??? Please???