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Re: Extra Ordan-ory (GAY STRUCTURE SOMEWHAT FIXED)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Feb 28th, '09, 10:08

it's nice bro i loved it .. your rhymes and lyrics seems good .. structure need a little bit fix .. but it's good .keep it comming , i love your shit . and by the way , how about moving your lazy ass and feed my staff bro .lol.. :b: :b: :y:
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Re: Extra Ordan-ory (GAY STRUCTURE SOMEWHAT FIXED)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Feb 28th, '09, 10:12

Coleon wrote:i was goin to feed that freestyle, but then that one fucker left you a story and a half of feedback and mine was along the lines of a sentence and a half so i waas just like fuck it, i'll still feed if you want


nah screw that homie :) .. that was suck .. but i'm doing a romantic piece ,, and i'm barley finishing it .. so ya i want ya to feed it ..
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Re: Extra Ordan-ory (GAY STRUCTURE SOMEWHAT FIXED)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Feb 28th, '09, 10:15

Coleon wrote:sounds good to me man, gotta love the lovey drops, just gotta :p


ya you should write some ,, but feel it before thinking doing it ..
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