The TRshady Forum became read-only in December 2014. The 10 year history will live on, in this archive.
Continue the discussion with the new home for the Eminem and Hip Hop discussion: HipHopShelter.com.

Tampered With Fate

Want to share a poem, story or a moving article? Share creative literature text here.

Tampered With Fate

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 1st, '09, 17:25

i tampered with fate to feel more alive
and to see what is real thru these mortal's eyes
but i made my mistakes and i fought for my breaks
tho i didn't always try
i wanted to face the horror's lies
and slaughter the snake, not replace him
oh save me but why bother?
i thought i was fake, to the sky i prayed on most high
so goodbye being a saint, to the gates, please just die
help me escape those ties then i might realise
i am great to rise cuz i would relate
cuz i'm no longer to shy away from the prize
it aint a cake walk, alright
i'm now crazy in my mind
erase things inside or change me
i'm blind to their painting of life
i'm waiting but i'm maybe too late
but disquises created this stranger
they're spies quite frank
point blank my mindstate needs tape
unwind me, be kind, i thank you
i signed the line, doing time like crime
they shanked me, sun shine's not mine
cuz shady designs dictate me: my patience declined
quit wasting my climb to raising my spine
i'm blazing...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
User avatar
Ka0t1c
Role Model
Role Model
 
Posts: 3919
Joined: Nov 16th, '05, 08:28
Location: Hell, Room #5150
Gender: Male

Re: Tampered With Fate

Postby Rain Matrix » Mar 1st, '09, 20:51

nice work
User avatar
Rain Matrix
Soldier
Soldier
 
Posts: 1967
Joined: Oct 6th, '06, 21:25
Location: In that mirage you saw.
Gender: Male

Re: Tampered With Fate

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 1st, '09, 20:56

thanx, and congrats for earning the "red name" :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
User avatar
Ka0t1c
Role Model
Role Model
 
Posts: 3919
Joined: Nov 16th, '05, 08:28
Location: Hell, Room #5150
Gender: Male


Return to Creative Writing



Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users