pretty damn lyrical if you ask meMore Stuff I Wrote On My Phone Today
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Re: More Stuff I Wrote On My Phone Today
by Ka0t1c » Mar 2nd, '09, 01:58
wow, i enjoy this type of stuff a lot, keep it dropping pretty damn lyrical if you ask me
pretty damn lyrical if you ask meoh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: More Stuff I Wrote On My Phone Today
by Solace » Mar 2nd, '09, 02:02
Haha im so jealous of you, your so damn good.
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no...Re: More Stuff I Wrote On My Phone Today
by MC Anonymous » Mar 2nd, '09, 02:40
Not bad, not bad....
You need to utilize structure, and not that big ass line structure you use, but a more condensed structure. Your pieces will be flowed much easier that way. Punchlines where average, multies were above average, wordplay was basic. A solid drop but nothing fantastic. 7/10
You need to utilize structure, and not that big ass line structure you use, but a more condensed structure. Your pieces will be flowed much easier that way. Punchlines where average, multies were above average, wordplay was basic. A solid drop but nothing fantastic. 7/10
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