Hidden Verse

[MC Anonymous]

I kept this hidden away for awhile...but I guess yall can see it

Wrap my hand around the mic like metallic cold
breathe in enough oxygen to suffocate the globe
take a pistol, rip through tissues with surgical strikes
if it's urgent you might get sliced with vertical knifes
I'm enticed, bring the knife to ya chest so ya see sections
fuck a election, kill the whole goverment with an erection
position a fist then, grip ten bullets, then whip them
hit men faster then agent 47 when his chrome gats spin
take traction, ask them to bring the flask in, combine
sunshine blinds eyes, I only conjured a punchline
take some lines, apply, rip out your spine, electricfy
throw lightning high, combine so these techs can fry
shootin' discs, reflection off of my fists breaks shit
take hits and brake it, movin' so slow, can't tape it
wrap around you neck, pound and deck, expect
to be dealt with next, wack MC's who tempt the best

[Ka0t1c]

i would've kept that hidden

[MC Anonymous]

i would've kept that hidden

Why?

[Ka0t1c]

i'm not a fan of your "gun play" and your just throwing in rhyming words a lot, it doesn't draw much creativity.

[MC Anonymous]

i'm not a fan of your "gun play" and your just throwing in rhyming words a lot, it doesn't draw much creativity.

I tend to disagree, I'll explain why. In that verse I utilized wordplay the most, and that takes the most creativity to do in Rap, multies in itself shows major creativity only because not many people can make strings of multies like that, that actually make sense. Also, if you was to look deeper into my rhymes then just saying it's me ''gunning'' you would notice the amount of work I put into my stuff. It gets me annoyed that people say I throw words together.

[Ka0t1c]

either way, i don't like it at all, it wasn't something i'd listen to

[MC Anonymous]

either way, i don't like it at all, it wasn't something i'd listen to

Yeah and I can accept that, just next time don't just say it's random words tied together.

[Ka0t1c]

i still think u put random rhymes in there but you do have a lot of multies

[gutawafang]

I've seen this on msn. You shared it. Yeah, I liked the way you do witht he multis as usual.

[Le Tunisien]

i still think u put random rhymes in there but you do have a lot of multies

Agree,yea its just boring

[rahul.never2far]

Definitely not your best... It was kinda just ok comparing to your previous one

But STill better than others (obviously including me)