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Postby Solace » Mar 2nd, '09, 04:37

I see this wack fucker, priding himself upon his race,
A racist motherfucker simply a waste of space,
Arabic Requiem murdered you and Tunisia,
Your lyrics are faker than the bridge to Terabithia,
With that cocky attitude, probably wearing a thong,
No gratitude, probably favorited Rhymezone.com,
Fake terrorist, get those turbans off of your rhymes,
Barely decent, have you ever looked at your lines?
Going, "You aint fine so stick to your design",
The fuck was that, writing through 2nd grade mind,
Dissing up James and shit, like he gives a fuck,
I'm 10 inches man, you can't even get it up,
Ain't even worth it, fuck buying a casket,
I'll cut up your limbs and let you live in a basket,
Your methods are pathetic, my powers are hectic,
Your barely a log of wood, my scraps are electric,
Quick to get defensive, attacking some legends,
You're a lucky motherfucker just to get mentioned.

PS. I mean no offense to mcZu.

MC Anonymous felt that I should post this, so I did. I just wanna see what'll happen after this. Another "You Crossed The Line" perhaps? Fkn hell i guess we gotta find out!
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Re: Landslide

Postby Requiem » Mar 2nd, '09, 06:43

oh oshit man, nice diss. really liked the punchlines. that terabithia line, and "u can't even get it up" line were classic :smoking:
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Re: Landslide

Postby Emadyville » Mar 2nd, '09, 07:50

Straight sick, ending was amazing :worship:

This was one crazy diss :y: :y: :y: :y: :y: :y:
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Re: Landslide

Postby Solace » Mar 3rd, '09, 22:52

Thanks guys :y:
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Re: Landslide

Postby rahul.never2far » Mar 4th, '09, 05:19

Great diss!


"I'm 10 inches man, you can't even get it up"
"Your methods are pathetic, my powers are hectic"

^^^ Awesome ones :y:
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Re: Landslide

Postby Solace » Mar 4th, '09, 22:13

rahul.never2far wrote:Great diss!


"I'm 10 inches man, you can't even get it up"
"Your methods are pathetic, my powers are hectic"

^^^ Awesome ones :y:

Thanks :happy:
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Re: Landslide

Postby Slim Zaddy » Mar 5th, '09, 09:16

this is stright sick Solace , you hve nice punshlines and multies , flow was on spot :y: , and bro plz stick to a name , i never knew this was you until i saw your avatar ,, but Solace is a nice name :y:
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Re: Landslide

Postby Solace » Mar 5th, '09, 22:22

z_em wrote:this is stright sick Solace , you hve nice punshlines and multies , flow was on spot :y: , and bro plz stick to a name , i never knew this was you until i saw your avatar ,, but Solace is a nice name :y:

Im sticking with Solace, i recently discovered Epiphany was taken so I was like fuck it and used Solace. Thanks for the feed, glad its good.
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Re: Landslide

Postby mcZu » Mar 5th, '09, 22:26

Not bad Solace, I enjoyed reading it man. And you may say what you want about Tunisia rofl :y:
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Re: Landslide

Postby Solace » Mar 5th, '09, 22:28

mcZu wrote:Not bad Solace, I enjoyed reading it man. And you may say what you want about Tunisia rofl :y:

Haha thanks dude
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