To H.E.R. wih Love

[Slim Zaddy]

it's good man , i like the emotions inside the verses ,, gd job here

[mcZu]

One of your best I read so far, good concept, good way of painting what you wanted on that lyrical canvas and above all you captured the emotions you wanted to bring over good and displayed them while still keeping a certain lyrical level. Flow was good, just one or two lines kinda were off, rhymes were decent but the emotions make this piece what it is. Good job.

[gutawafang]

Nice. But not quite well expressed. I don't like the flow of the chorus. Some lyrics I can't relate to. Still, it's quite nice.