Just Writin

[Dave_Menard01]

I look at weezy n tip like they my mentor's //
All they ever taught me was pimp girls, n stunt hard //
Get money, fuck bitches, drive fast cars //
When u play in tha game, play like a guitar //
Master your fingerin', tha weed smoke linger's man //
When you ride ride alone, dont ever trust no men //
Unless those r your friends, unless those b your boys //
Unless you ball 2gether, n when u win rejoice //
Ive fuckin mastered this, yes greatness does exsist //
Im jus a money maker, shit call me ludacris //
Or call me B.I.G., its all tha same 2 me //
Cuz i am way past tha boilin point, im 3rd degree //
Ya i got cali heat, man I b florida hot //
I always hit tha bulls eye like this a game of darts //
No u dont wanna start, so i suggest we finish //
Or i'll erase you from this world, like u a bad blemish //
See me I b a menice, n my flo's relentless //
I mix tha lyrics with tha beat, like im a chemist //
This be a science, so dont u even try it //
Man every single law of gravity I b defyin //
Ya im high , im flyin, sorin' over planes //
You may consider this 1, but I aint playin games //
No, Im takin names, ya, im startin flames //
Im gettin paid bitch, thats right im tailor made //
Ya im custom fitted, so dont u hoe's 4get it //
Take your ball to tha hoop, you'll only get rejected //
You'll only get shot down, you'll only get beat //
Cuz im tha B.E.S.T., im elite //

[Slim Zaddy]

as said above , and try to make it rhyme actually , fix the flow , cuz at some spots it's off , but as it's your first time , it was a good try actually ,,

[Dave_Menard01]

as said above , and try to make it rhyme actually , fix the flow , cuz at some spots it's off , but as it's your first time , it was a good try actually ,,

As a matter of fact this aint my 1st time i've been writin since i was 16 n the part bout it has no subject is cause its called jus writin i jus went no need for a subject it wasnt a track... n who ever talkin bout tha rhyme or make it flo u have no idea has its rapped or nothin like that so u cant talk shit

[Slim Zaddy]

as said above , and try to make it rhyme actually , fix the flow , cuz at some spots it's off , but as it's your first time , it was a good try actually ,,

As a matter of fact this aint my 1st time i've been writin since i was 16 n the part bout it has no subject is cause its called jus writin i jus went no need for a subject it wasnt a track... n who ever talkin bout tha rhyme or make it flo u have no idea has its rapped or nothin like that so u cant talk shit

listen to me my friend if you can’t handle the feeds or the truth, then don’t post shit here ro don’t bother your self waiting feeds , just write in the title (if you have a positive feedback then say it if you don’t then save it to yourself) so do you want me to tell it’s sick an dope while it’s not, I’m not that kind of guy, go find other one , and if you want to improve you have to take critic to your heart or you will stay where you’re , at the bottom

[MC Anonymous]

as said above , and try to make it rhyme actually , fix the flow , cuz at some spots it's off , but as it's your first time , it was a good try actually ,,

As a matter of fact this aint my 1st time i've been writin since i was 16 n the part bout it has no subject is cause its called jus writin i jus went no need for a subject it wasnt a track... n who ever talkin bout tha rhyme or make it flo u have no idea has its rapped or nothin like that so u cant talk shit

listen to me my friend if you can’t handle the feeds or the truth, then don’t post shit here ro don’t bother your self waiting feeds , just write in the title (if you have a positive feedback then say it if you don’t then save it to yourself) so do you want me to tell it’s sick an dope while it’s not, I’m not that kind of guy, go find other one , and if you want to improve you have to take critic to your heart or you will stay where you’re , at the bottom

PWN3D!

[Solace]

That was bad.

[gutawafang]

multis used were zero I guess. First few lines already threw me off. but hell, keep practicing.

it was yeah,