The TRshady Forum became read-only in December 2014. The 10 year history will live on, in this archive.
Continue the discussion with the new home for the Eminem and Hip Hop discussion: HipHopShelter.com.

i hate my lust (rape fantasy)

Want to share a poem, story or a moving article? Share creative literature text here.

i hate my lust (rape fantasy)

Postby enjinn » Mar 7th, '09, 11:14

I hate my lust...it makes me wanna rape the slut
Tape her up, shove a blade up her pussy and taste the blood
I was made from dust, and live with demons, my dick is pleadin to spit its semen
On a child's face while the bitch is screamin
Leave her parents sick and greavin, see this switchblade? im skilled with it
Wanna see a bitch raped? i film the shit
After i snatch a fat hoe, and let my hands close, around her damn throat
While im shovin the camera up her asshole
Only with a black soul, that’s blank and numb
Can watch the bitch die after she drank your cum
Take my dick and spank her tongue, cuz I love the power
Of forcin a bitch to bend over and fuck for hours
Or make her look in my eyes while she’s sucking my dick
I’ll stretch her pussy lips and leave it covered in slits
Rupture her clit, and leave her where the fishes swim
I hate my lust…it makes me repeat all these vicious sins
each one teaches one
User avatar
enjinn
Trailer Trash
Trailer Trash
 
Posts: 309
Joined: Aug 28th, '08, 06:00
Location: germany
Gender: Male

Re: i hate my lust (rape fantasy)

Postby Solace » Mar 7th, '09, 20:29

Damn dude that scared me kinda lmfao. The depictions are crazy. Shows how phsycotic text can be haha. I hope you really dont wanna do that :zipped:
Image
User avatar
Solace
Bad Influence
Bad Influence
 
Posts: 19901
Joined: Apr 25th, '08, 03:12
Gender: Male

Re: i hate my lust (rape fantasy)

Postby TripleNineThree » Mar 9th, '09, 02:01

damn that was fuckin dark homie hah, but it was sick lyrically and actually sick lol, decent lyrics just kinda scary
User avatar
TripleNineThree
Soldier
Soldier
 
Posts: 616
Joined: Dec 20th, '08, 19:30
Location: Minnesota
Gender: Male

Re: i hate my lust (rape fantasy)

Postby theJFKshow » Mar 9th, '09, 02:57

What the fuck is wrong with you?
theJFKshow
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2510
Joined: Feb 26th, '06, 22:16

Re: i hate my lust (rape fantasy)

Postby gutawafang » Mar 10th, '09, 07:50

SEXY man. It really sounds like I'm watching a movie. Really, I liked it dude. :y:

Full marks for being so pro. :y:
ADD ME ON PS4: gutawafang
Currently playing: Destiny
Image
TR Rap Battle Record: 23-8
User avatar
gutawafang
Pill Popper
Pill Popper
 
Posts: 9474
Joined: Dec 13th, '07, 08:01
Location: Lion City
Gender: Male

Re: i hate my lust (rape fantasy)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Mar 10th, '09, 09:29

yup , we did'nt have that type of writing a long time ago , but yeah that's was good homie , i liked it , the concept is great too . gd drop . i enjoyed it :y:
Image
z_em = Slim Zaddy = Zaid AQ which is my real name
User avatar
Slim Zaddy
Role Model
Role Model
 
Posts: 3764
Joined: Aug 21st, '08, 19:42
Location: never mind
Gender: Male

Re: i hate my lust (rape fantasy)

Postby Sarah P » Mar 10th, '09, 15:28

this is so scary! :'(
...

i can't understand how a man got you choosing ... ♪
User avatar
Sarah P
Closet Cleaner
Closet Cleaner
 
Posts: 94
Joined: Mar 10th, '09, 14:58
Location: England!
Gender: Female

Re: i hate my lust (rape fantasy)

Postby neversnooze » Mar 11th, '09, 17:14

this reminded me of something "Cannibal Corpse" would write. just sick and brutal. interesting write, i wouldnt advise you to actually performing it, unless its a music video :p

flow was on point, structure was alittle shaky.

7/10 tone down the brutality :tounge2:
Sometimes I stay up so late that I have my morning coffee before I go to bed
User avatar
neversnooze
Soldier
Soldier
 
Posts: 997
Joined: Jun 11th, '08, 17:00
Gender: Male


Return to Creative Writing



Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users

cron