NEW SHIT -not done-

[MC Anonymous]

Watch me move the Lee, crawl through O, and Mac 10 your name
ever challange anyone, bitch you should be ashamed
(only lines I need to own him)

Basking in city lights, hitting heights
spittin' spikes, heart beat begins to rip mics
sip light, mechanical majestic master, faster
lashin' laughter, slaughter after disaster
plaster your brains, insane, sniff cocaine
exhaling propaine, no names, only game
homies slain, tribulations, lyrical configuration
brain coms rig the nation, no salvation
no protection, detection of wack rappers
infiltrate theres mind matrix like crack hackers
I'm not a back stabber, I'll shank your cornea
the only time your head is hard is if you hornier
I'm scornin' ya, destroyin ya, I'm a rap quasar
don't step up, masturbation only time you played hard
I slay charzards with fire breath, pyro meth
like fairy odd parents I'll leave ya with a cracked cleft
push your back left like a formation shift
and spit a middle bullet, striked in the chest like a MLB miss

[Solace]

rofl cant wait to see this finished

[neversnooze]

you rhymed and the structure was well constructed. hands down you do have the vocabulary on your list You had a couple good metaphors but the enjoyability of this piece is . your skills remind me of canibus style

overall in my opinion, you seem like a charlatan. when it comes to disses, you are preferably better at it than writing lyrics.

sorry bro nothing personal 6/10

[MC Anonymous]

you rhymed and the structure was well constructed. hands down you do have the vocabulary on your list You had a couple good metaphors but the enjoyability of this piece is . your skills remind me of canibus style

overall in my opinion, you seem like a charlatan. when it comes to disses, you are preferably better at it than writing lyrics.

sorry bro nothing personal 6/10

It's alright, all you gotta do is look for my emotional pieces cause' I know you like those better

[Ka0t1c]

i enjoyed it, everything fit nice to compliment each others rhymes, not much to improve for this piece... good job

btw, about corneas: i scratched mine yesterday so i can't see too well, it fucking hurts!

[leeomac]

Watch me move the Lee, crawl through O, and Mac 10 your name
ever challange anyone, bitch you should be ashamed
(only lines I need to own him)

MC Anonymous ive only just saw your rap,
whats that i said rap?!
Sorry i meant your crap!
You talk about crawling through my name?
Bruv you should be ashamed,
Cause your petty little lines aint going to work this time,
MC Anonymous, its my time to shine,
Your anonymous, i am not,
You will hide, where as id take the shot,
You said only lines needed to own me?
MC Anonymous the best possible thing you could do is shushhhhhhh!

[Solace]

Watch me move the Lee, crawl through O, and Mac 10 your name
ever challange anyone, bitch you should be ashamed
(only lines I need to own him)

MC Anonymous ive only just saw your rap,
whats that i said rap?!
Sorry i meant your crap!
You talk about crawling through my name?
Bruv you should be ashamed,
Cause your petty little lines aint going to work this time,
MC Anonymous, its my time to shine,
Your anonymous, i am not,
You will hide, where as id take the shot,
You said only lines needed to own me?
MC Anonymous the best possible thing you could do is shushhhhhhh!

His lines totally destroyed yours lol...Only thing CLOSE to being decent was "Your anonymous, i am not" but thats kinda been used a lot, people saying "your anonymous cause no one ever heard of you!"

Anyways that was just weak as fuck.

[leeomac]

Watch me move the Lee, crawl through O, and Mac 10 your name
ever challange anyone, bitch you should be ashamed
(only lines I need to own him)

MC Anonymous ive only just saw your rap,
whats that i said rap?!
Sorry i meant your crap!
You talk about crawling through my name?
Bruv you should be ashamed,
Cause your petty little lines aint going to work this time,
MC Anonymous, its my time to shine,
Your anonymous, i am not,
You will hide, where as id take the shot,
You said only lines needed to own me?
MC Anonymous the best possible thing you could do is shushhhhhhh!

His lines totally destroyed yours lol...Only thing CLOSE to being decent was "Your anonymous, i am not" but thats kinda been used a lot, people saying "your anonymous cause no one ever heard of you!"

Anyways that was just weak as fuck.

Seriously? Now i actually thought that it was alryt, it flowed and at the same time i thought was quite funny, but obviously im missing the point somewhere along here

[Solace]

Seriously? Now i actually thought that it was alryt, it flowed and at the same time i thought was quite funny, but obviously im missing the point somewhere along here

It was wack. You fucked the flow at the end, no punches, gay lines, it wasnt funny at all. Only thing humorous about it was that you thought it was good.

[Le Tunisien]

its just some rhyming words put together, no sense , Boring