(Not) Dedicated to Fanning

[gutawafang]

If I ever fall ill, you'll be my prescription
You'll be my medicine, don't matter your description
In my tattoo, you'll be the inscription
You'll still be the drug of my addiction
But enough with the injections, let's look at the sky
I adjust my eye position, you still make me high
Hi, you'll be the one that I'll be penning
I love your beauty, though you ain't Hannah Dakota Fanning
Sparks I'm fanning, to form flames that I'm setting
Still it's depending if you could feel the words I'm enchanting
Words that I put a hex on but you could relax on
I put the facts on here without paying tax on
Stop, a keystyle can never describe my recondite love for you
"You're the" won't express my positive mirth is you
Ever since birth it's you, still loving you
Now with this skill I'm wording you, it's worth for you
I'll surgically remove my heart to show you it's stopped
Or maybe skipped a beat, like how a beat goes in hiphop
Stop it, you know this is for you
Yeah, only you, sorry if this last two lines made you threw

[Slim Zaddy]

]If I ever fall ill, you'll be my prescription
You'll be my medicine, don't matter your description
In my tattoo, you'll be the inscription
You'll still be the drug of my addiction
But enough with the injections, let's look at the sky
I adjust my eye position, you still make me high
I'll surgically remove my heart to show you it's stopped
Or maybe skipped a beat, like how a beat goes in hiphop

those are my best lines,, you had some good multies and imagery ,, i liked them ,, you start solid , but in the middle i was losing interest and flow start to be off, to me, but then again you get back on the track ,, so yeah i enjoyed it man,, love the first 4 lines ... keep it up ,,, gd job 7/10 ..

[gutawafang]

]If I ever fall ill, you'll be my prescription
You'll be my medicine, don't matter your description
In my tattoo, you'll be the inscription
You'll still be the drug of my addiction
But enough with the injections, let's look at the sky
I adjust my eye position, you still make me high
I'll surgically remove my heart to show you it's stopped
Or maybe skipped a beat, like how a beat goes in hiphop

those are my best lines,, you had some good multies and imagery ,, i liked them ,, you start solid , but in the middle i was losing interest and flow start to be off, to me, but then again you get back on the track ,, so yeah i enjoyed it man,, love the first 4 lines ... keep it up ,,, gd job 7/10 ..

Yeah, I apologize. The second part was indeed written at a different time when my mood was not good. I simply wanted to end it.

But thanks Zaddy!