Fish Keystyle 2

[gutawafang]

I walk alone, see stones, I kick them aside
Humming a tone, and out of tune, it's alright
My mind runs to somebody I wanna meet
Psychic words voice out and I greet
Oh shit, she didn't hear what I said
My mind came back to me and it's gained some weight
It's fate that it's too late, I thought I wanna wait
Instead I trade my joy for something great
And it is friendship, the rope that ties us
But you know in our hearts, it despise us
It defies me, lies to me, and it breaks me
You can't console me, you can't control me, and it aches me
I still love you, my eyes closed, I see you
Is this really love then? I suppose it is cuz I miss you

I wrote this anyhow.

[MC Anonymous]

I walk alone, see stones, I kick them aside
Humming a tone, and out of tune, it's alright
My mind runs to somebody I wanna meet
Psychic words voice out and I greet
Oh shit, she didn't hear what I said
My mind came back to me and it's gained some weight
It's fate that it's too late, I thought I wanna wait
Instead I trade my joy for something great
And it is friendship, the rope that ties us
But you know in our hearts, it despise us
It defies me, lies to me, and it breaks me
You can't console me, you can't control me, and it aches me
I still love you, my eyes closed, I see you
Is this really love then? I suppose it is cuz I miss you

I wrote this anyhow.

You're improving. Good drop, standard rhyming but above standard emotion.

[gutawafang]

Thanks Anonymus! It's all thanks to you bro!