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cali gold

Postby tjb » Mar 14th, '09, 20:39

idk have a chorus yet butttt heres the rest
feed please apreciated
chorus


verse 1:
im still just a kid, just 14 years old
but i rap like i need a piece of tht cali gold
i have dreams like im sleepin
but i keep a flow an stay cuz i dont plan on leaving
all there is around me is lies.. decievin
something for nothin recieving for no reason
an the girls is all desparat so they try to please me
an come off kinda mean an way to needy
an they say i cant talk about shots,cuz i didnt see it happen
well the same goes to all the bros who talk bout money, they dont have when there rappin
i rele just want to scream an snap
cuz there like a toothless old man.. there just flappin
but ill killem with tht so i pile high like flap jacks
cook up your batter kill your wack ass
seems fruitys in these days, your a bunch of skittles
rap bout hoes, but play each others fidlles
what are we in new england? actually i am
but im not gonna make em make me half of a man
bunch of faggots, your all compacted, half of that, bunch of fractions
bits an pieces actin sirius but we lagh atcha like we delirius..


chorus



Verse 2
so if you dont like my lyrics why you listening?
if you dont want to here it change the channel stop bitchin bitch
dont try to hate ill throw you in the english channel
or like a mobster in the ny canal
w/ cement shoes yes cement boots
tht drop you to the bottom so your screams wont go through
your screams are bubblin thts all we see
but it's no trouble cuz iff i hear sirens ill just sprint on the doubl
and even if you sent me to do my time
id spend so your watch wasnt goin as fast as mine
do you get the message a paris hilton sentence
its fake like we were playing, pretedin
but i could go on for days so this hurrendous
idk maby ill never end it


chorus
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