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Life Time Intertwined.

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Life Time Intertwined.

Postby MC Anonymous » Mar 18th, '09, 02:27

As life passes by I pace with glassy eyes
life had me cry, then life asked me why
my reflection is life, my shadow is death
I battle with breaths, you dismantle what's left
I cry when it rains, can't expend my pain
land was gain, enslaved, and put to waste
bodies bloodstained my body, gained by shotties
oddly enough, my blood is polluted inside me
spirits ride me, energy consumes the source
anger consumes my thought, disaster was forced
blood pumps faster, magma inside my veins
civilians stained for defiling my name
as I walk, time stops, language is destroyed
this void in my heart has now been deployed
my eyes can bleed, now the tears are pure
my eyes can see, for the years are sure
destruction for rebirth, born with this curse
humanity tends to end at the start of this verse
bacteria inside me, with no antibodies
besides catastrophe I've been holding back softly
I can't take the pressure, my bones shatter
shards strike my heart, lava splatters
I send out a final cry, as my skin turns to craters
till the end of time, nothing can save her....
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Life Time Intertwined.

Postby Solace » Mar 19th, '09, 22:21

Good shit man, people sleep on you too much (not in that way lol).
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Re: Life Time Intertwined.

Postby mcZu » Mar 23rd, '09, 16:14

Love this poetic side of yours, keep dropping these pieces. A smooth ass flow and a dark toned laid back beat would make this a dope song.
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