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Lil Jeezy - Holla At Me (Feat. Solace)

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Lil Jeezy - Holla At Me (Feat. Solace)

Postby Solace » Mar 31st, '09, 01:14

Some dude from Shadowville hit me up for a collab. It was gunna be audio but neither of us can record so I just thought to post whats of it atm.

[Chorus: Lil Jeezy]
When you see me by the block you know whats up,
Selling some candies in a plastic cup,
A handful is just 1G,
If you want some more just holla at me.

[Verse 1: Lil Jeezy]
When you see me by the block, holla at me,
I accept all buyers even wannabes,
We sellin' candies, you know what I mean?
Dogs can't smell, it's in the coffee beans,
homies gettin jacked and stabbed in the back,
im new to the game so just cut me some slack,
Try to jack me?! All you'll see is black,
People saying "What happened?! I heard Pap Pap!",
just one bullet through your lil body,
im too risky just like Jeff Hardy,
bein on tha streets aint no game,
my white shirts are all blood stained,
when it comes to money im insane,
got a G on the line im hard to maintain,
you want some grapes? Holla at me,
need some CC?just holla at me,
cravin brownies? Holla at me,
i got about everything you need,
i NEVA run outta stock homie holla at me,
No phone calls tho cops track it,
MY locks are secure its hard to crack it,
Dont try to steal youll end up on the ground,
Da Homie Young Typhoon got the 2nd round!
YUH!

[Chorus]

[Verse 2: Yung Typhoon]
*Didn't Do It*

[Chorus]

[Verse 3: Solace]
Well some say things changed and rearranged,
This is strange but I'm always up for an exchange,
I keep this shit on the block, selling rocks,
And keep this shit away from you swelling cocks,
This deal is at the top, so I guess you can't take it,
I'm getting rowdy in the streets and I might break shit,
Compare the income, it's obvious that you're lesser,
Might as well go and off yourself like Heath Ledger,
Bring green across the streets like a St. Patricks parade,
Explosive deals while most deals are lacking grenades,
Quality is like a steak against a fuckin' can of peas,
Love these druggies like they were apart of my family,
Hustle dope seeds around the block like baby mamas pussy,
I'm a construction worker cause crack is what im pushing,
And I'm happy cause I used to need dollars badly,
Remember if you see me in the block just holler at me.
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Re: Lil Jeezy - Holla At Me (Feat. Solace)

Postby Xray » Mar 31st, '09, 01:28

Your verse was a lot better than Lil Jeezy. His lyrics were basic as hell. The concept is a major fail, I mean "I keep this shit on the block, selling rocks" right. :whistle:

Don't collab with that dude again lol his turning you into a candy shop son, keep it real.
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Re: Lil Jeezy - Holla At Me (Feat. Solace)

Postby Solace » Mar 31st, '09, 01:30

lol thanks for feeding. Just that i didnt wanna turn down a collab. I've never even tried that subject so i was at loss. No disrespect to LJ, I can tell hes just beginning. I'll stick to my usual shit. :y:
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Re: Lil Jeezy - Holla At Me (Feat. Solace)

Postby Robbie G » Mar 31st, '09, 01:31

Lil jeezy? I wonder were he got that name. :whistle:

The concept just didn't do it for me but your lyrics were still pretty good. :y:
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Re: Lil Jeezy - Holla At Me (Feat. Solace)

Postby ShAdY CaPo 08 » Mar 31st, '09, 01:32

solace plz dont start tryin to be a "trap star"..
see they can trigger me but they'll never figure me out...

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Re: Lil Jeezy - Holla At Me (Feat. Solace)

Postby Solace » Mar 31st, '09, 01:33

Shady Babie wrote:Lil jeezy? I wonder were he got that name. :whistle:

The concept just didn't do it for me but your lyrics were still pretty good. :y:

lmfao thanks.

Thanks for feeding Shady Capo. Damn you feeding when i write a crappy piece :o
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Re: Lil Jeezy - Holla At Me (Feat. Solace)

Postby ShAdY CaPo 08 » Mar 31st, '09, 01:38

nah, im just lazy with postin' anything these days, im always on TR though but yea i still like your flow but just you bein a trap-star im not feelin lol
see they can trigger me but they'll never figure me out...

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Re: Lil Jeezy - Holla At Me (Feat. Solace)

Postby Solace » Mar 31st, '09, 01:40

lol k ill stick to my usual stuff. :smoking:
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Re: Lil Jeezy - Holla At Me (Feat. Solace)

Postby Solace » Mar 31st, '09, 01:47

Thanks for checking it :smoking:
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