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I'm Rusty , like Bike Chains (17 Bars

Postby J Roc » Apr 4th, '09, 20:02

All These DAWGS DENIED YO That This DAWG COULD WRITE FLOW Cuz Its DAWGGY'S STYLE
But Ya'll Dickryders Ride Dick , But Claim Ya'll Don't Cuz It Aint DOGGYSTYLE !!! hahaha
Susan Hurt ME, J? Ya "TEETH"-FAKE & HUNGRY? Like APES & MONKEYS you a "DK" (Decay)
u BLOW GEEEKS So It Can't Be a ROAD STREET When She Was in a "THREE-WAY" !!!!
Whut Was i SuPPOSED TO DO? Everything i Wrote Was WROTE FOR YOU
Tryina COPE WITH YOU , But I Remember When u Always WROTE IT TOO
FUCK THIS TEEN It Aint Matter Cuz Lyrically You "UNDER ME" Cuz Im 'OVER YOU'!!!
James Scrtips "Stinks" Whut The HELL , LOOK? He Got "B.O , OKAY?" Like Im Tryina SPELL BOOK !
Mad That J Smokes PHILLIES , He Tried to Claim he KILLED ME But I'm Still Alive Like a SPELLBOOK!
Ya'll Can Say That J'S THE WORST , Even CLAIM IM THIRD With Yall Punches PLAYED AS DIRT
I Could Say Sticcy Z liked My First Line But He'd try n say that ANAL HURTS !!! ='( lol
ForREAL? OHH JEEZ ! Why Ya'll Gotta go On The Net And Act Like TREAL OG's ?? :(
When Rain MATRIX .. TAPED IT But Even With All Those Movies , Aint a "T'REAL OG/TRILOGY" !
Is MCMAYBE an EMCEE? MAYBE But His Tapes In The Dumpster like BRENDA'S BABY!
So Of COURSE ITS SICK ;) lol all ur Rhymes Is BORING WITH BORING TWISTS
fuck The TIME FRAME Try n Be LIKE J n Just Be BORN IN WITH Some SORTA GIFT ;)
Fuck HOMIES OPTIONS He's ONLY "POPPING"..CORKS OF A DRINK.."MORE THEN U THINK"
Like TASH8's MAN DATES When He POSED AS A BITCH On The FORUMS & SHIT !!! Lol!!
Maybee , The FOURS HITTING YOU BEST In The CORPSE RIPPING THE FLESH
My GAT? YUP! Just Like Ur ASS.."TOUCHED" That'll Make This WHORE.."GIVE IT A REST"!!!!!
Its up To FATE, LOOK Thomas Only had GAY JOKES..Ya'll Think There ORIGINAL? YES??..!
If My BeRETTA BUST All Ya'll SETTERS "DUCK" Without FEATHERS , YUP!
These Are JOKES SO KEEP IT Cuz Ya'll Can't "OPEN SEASON" Like ELMAR FUDD!!!
Right now I'm LIFELESS Cuz Me & Susan's Like a `LIGHT SWITCH`..ON & OFF!!!!/ & Coleon..
BRAVO OCK u unWOKE A BEAST PRONE TO SLEEP , Now u Should CALL THE COPS
Tell Them u was FOLLOWED , STOP!! My New Names The BARBOR SHOP!!
Cuz u Gotta FRICKING "PERM" BITCH Cuz My BUISCUITS "GERMAN" ... Your OMISH?? NAW!
They'll Be Like "I Remember TUESDAY"..Coleon? NEW NAME..HOLOCAUST!!!
SOLACE?? Ya SOULS GAY , OKAY?? Lol Im Known-To-Spit "Dope"-As-Strips Of COCAINE!
NO WAYYY That BASTARDS DUMB For Tryina "GAS YOU UP" With Tanks Of PROPAINE!!
I'm Verbally Sick , I dunt Got An ANTIDOTE I Know Ya'll Are Like TASH..A HOE
So I'll BLAM A BLOW That's FINNA GET YA Like `NIGAHIGA` Then Yank Ya CAMEL TOES!!!

No Hate to Any1 But The People I Mentionedd..Even Them I'm not Too bothered lol
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Re: I'm Rusty , like Bike Chains

Postby J Roc » Apr 4th, '09, 20:03

Bars For Days ^^!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Woulda Kept going but some People hti Me up I Gotta get a Shower Then Tannn It hahaha `1
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Re: I'm Rusty , like Bike Chains (17 Bars

Postby MC Anonymous » Apr 4th, '09, 21:01

Haha I liked this. 8/10
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: I'm Rusty , like Bike Chains (17 Bars

Postby J Roc » Apr 4th, '09, 22:13

Thankss for Reading ^ :y:
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Re: I'm Rusty , like Bike Chains (17 Bars

Postby James R. » Apr 5th, '09, 02:19

I already told you don't throw rocks at the throne
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Re: I'm Rusty , like Bike Chains (17 Bars

Postby J Roc » Apr 5th, '09, 02:59

McMaybe wrote:As a song, it was above average. Great in some parts. As a diss, it was probably the worst diss I've ever read. How are any of your "punches" in that piece hurtful in any way? Nice try tho.

Either way, keep your day job and hit me up when you cut the arrogance and grow a set. :flower:


I Dunno Just Needed a Toppic haha .. Wrote The Texes Holdem Bar Then Got Into a thing , Dissing a bunch of people lol ... :8) ..... kinda fell off near the end cuz , i needed to leave sooon haah

& Jame's We All know , J's The Punchline King .... Ya'll Some Lightweights :onehandweight:

Thanks For Readin Though :y:
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Re: I'm Rusty , like Bike Chains (17 Bars

Postby James R. » Apr 5th, '09, 03:23

You can be the punchline king all you want, I'm just the King of this shit.
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Re: I'm Rusty , like Bike Chains (17 Bars

Postby Solace » Apr 5th, '09, 03:31

LOL dude you couldnt even rhyme my name. Learn the pronunciation before you diss :laughing:

I dont see why you randomly diss me tho :unsure:
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Re: I'm Rusty , like Bike Chains (17 Bars

Postby J Roc » Apr 5th, '09, 03:40

Solace wrote:LOL dude you couldnt even rhyme my name. Learn the pronunciation before you diss :laughing:

I dont see why you randomly diss me tho :unsure:


I Dunno I Think You was Talking shit?? i dunno haha took a guesss :happy:

Thankss For Reading :y:
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Re: I'm Rusty , like Bike Chains (17 Bars

Postby yamahiney16 » Apr 5th, '09, 20:00

this is wack...its good shit
i may be short, but im smart. The only thing ppl must know about me is: I'm always right, so get used to it
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Re: I'm Rusty , like Bike Chains (17 Bars

Postby JMG » Apr 5th, '09, 22:06

-3/10
JMG wrote: so are you gonna come fight me or not

Menzo wrote:No, I HAVE something to live for.
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Re: I'm Rusty , like Bike Chains (17 Bars

Postby J Roc » Apr 6th, '09, 01:38

JMG wrote:-3/10


Tell Me When ur On That Level :)
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Re: I'm Rusty , like Bike Chains (17 Bars

Postby Solace » Apr 6th, '09, 01:49

J roc wrote:
Solace wrote:LOL dude you couldnt even rhyme my name. Learn the pronunciation before you diss :laughing:

I dont see why you randomly diss me tho :unsure:


I Dunno I Think You was Talking shit?? i dunno haha took a guesss :happy:

Thankss For Reading :y:

Pronounced Sol-Is not Soul-Ace btw
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Re: I'm Rusty , like Bike Chains (17 Bars

Postby J Roc » Apr 6th, '09, 02:10

McMaybe wrote:
J roc wrote:
JMG wrote:-3/10


Tell Me When ur On That Level :)



No offense dude, JMG is pretty damn sick...


No Offense Taken lol
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Re: I'm Rusty , like Bike Chains (17 Bars

Postby JMG » Apr 6th, '09, 02:14

y thank ya
JMG wrote: so are you gonna come fight me or not

Menzo wrote:No, I HAVE something to live for.
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