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Light..like Christmas

Postby J Roc » Apr 8th, '09, 22:49

Ya'll Aint DIGGING MY SCRIPTURES? Then Ya'll KIDDIES SHOULD DIG DIRT
My WOMAN , THEIR SKIN CURVES and TITTIES IS LARGE ,
And We MAKE UP When THEY "SUCK" Like STICCY Z BARS !! Lol!
YOU'LL GET BLAMMED , YUP All The TOOLS JUS STACK UP , Aimed For ya CREW AND THATS ALL
By The CLIPS? YES Or You'll "DIP-SET" like JUELZ SANTANA !!!
If Rap Is Art Then MOVE THE DAMN BRUSH Cuz Ur PAGES IN WHITE
Talk About PLAYING WITH TIDES , Even On Land , You'd "Sink" Like DRAINS N SOME PIPES !!
When i Make JOKES TO DISS YOU , DONT CONTINUE Just Stop And TAKE THE ADVICE !!!
Cuz You Think Your SET TO FACE HIM When Every Line i Spit Deserves EXCLAMATIONS??..!!
haha , i BEEN IN A HOME ,, Flipped The Matress n Had SEX WITH A HOE !!
I'm Obsessed With MAKING A TAPE n Only Way "J'LL ESCAPE" Is DIGGING A HOLE !!! (Jail)

Ya'll Aint digging my scriptures? Then Ya'll Kiddies Should Dig Dirt
My Woman , Their Skin Curves and Titties is Large ,
And We Make Up When They suck Like Sticcy Z Bars
you'll Get Blammed , yup All The Tools Just Stacked Up , Aimed For ya Crew And thats all
By The Clips? yes Or You'll Dip Set like Juelz Santana
If Rap Is Art Then Move The Damn Crush Cuz Ur Pages In White
Talk About Playing In Tides , Even On Land , You'd Sink Like Drains And Some Pipes
When i Make Jokes To Diss You , Dont Continue Just Stop And Take The Advice
Cuz You Think Your Set To Face Him When Every Line i Spit Deserves Exclamations
haha , i Been in a home ,, Flipped The Matress n Had Sex with a hoe
I'm Obsessed With Making a tape n Only Way J'll Escape Is Digging a hole


Boredd So i wrote Some Weak Shit Haha .... put a non dressed up version on For Everyone That Hates My Style lol
Last edited by J Roc on Jun 22nd, '09, 19:17, edited 3 times in total.
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Re: Light..like Christmas

Postby MC Anonymous » Apr 8th, '09, 23:43

Second one was easier to read. Although I've seen way better from you. Still good though. 7/10 :y:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Light..like Christmas

Postby J Roc » Apr 9th, '09, 00:42

Yeahh You Could Use The First For Reference I Suppose ^ , Thanks For reading
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Re: Light..like Christmas

Postby Solace » Apr 9th, '09, 02:41

Coleon wrote:
If Rap Is Art Then Move The Damn Crush Cuz Ur Pages In White
Talk About Playing In Tides , Even On Land , You'd Sink Like Drains And Some Pipes


that was dope man :y:

yeah prob a 7/10

why don't you do audio?

Word man id love to actually hear this shit :y:
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