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Letter before Death

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Letter before Death

Postby Slim Zaddy » Apr 13th, '09, 20:30

Outraging air, violent sweeps as to breathe I try *gasp*
Breathing, balance I lack, just this pen and paper in lap
Perhaps my last moments in life, in sights and lingering
All goals in life pass through my mind, as I hold swindeling
Nervousness set in long ago, tragic deaths the world behold
Can God save us now?... question nobody knows...
The reports I didn't believe.. instead I sat lonely
No money to leave, I just had my family.. only
God, save my family to a place far away, spare me
Fuck mother nature, and death how its posed' to be
Leave me here as I die, and let the winds pass them by
If u bring us to heaven, cry remains and I'll still ask why
No place better then here, our one life on this earth
Birth to old age.. God please.. do it for all I'm worth...
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Re: Letter before Death

Postby gutawafang » Apr 21st, '09, 09:27

Man I felt the shit.

LOL. It does sound like a letter to me man. Inspiring. :y:
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Re: Letter before Death

Postby Slim Zaddy » May 3rd, '09, 17:29

gutawafang wrote:Man I felt the shit.

LOL. It does sound like a letter to me man. Inspiring. :y:


thanks man .. anytime bro
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