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MacDougal Diss Response lol

Postby James R. » Apr 27th, '09, 02:40

Things just ain’t the same for James cuz
I gotta drop a new diss everyday for these lame thugs
I can’t shrug these peasants throwin rocks at the throne
The other fucker talk about how poppin his chrome
I’m on their mind punches come at me so sloppily thrown
I ride the flow up the ranks and I parked in your dome
I can’t be stopped so there’s no tryin this shit
You ain’t even on the site, just ghost ridin my dick
Ha, fuckin wit me think you got a lil flow up
It’s known that I’m sick son you barely spittin throw up
There aint enough in your pants you got a couple of fans
I do it on stage man you’re stuck in the stands
For real, you couldn’t possibly think we were the same type
At least come correct you aint even spell my name right
Let’s bring it in the open wit your fraudulent ass
Last time we spoke you said TR was all in the past
So I guess schools out and you went through another bitch
You cheated on the last one and blew it up a bit, but
Scotty’s the man he’s hotter than damn
So another chick shoulda came at the drop of a hand
You probably scan for my posts all day and night
I don’t even need your verification to say its right
Common sense told me that your whole persona was fake
Comin on before I did and kept returning as late
And you loved the controversy you couldn’t get enough
Brought some bull shit at me tryna do smtn tough
But fuck it Scotty it’s cool just keep doin what you do
Partyin hard at home alone wit your whole fuckin crew
Readin my posts on a whole forum that doesn’t want you
Takin shots at the god what the fuck is wrong wit you?
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Re: MacDougal Diss Response lol

Postby brutus09shady » Apr 27th, '09, 02:52

takin shots at god what the fuck is wrong with you

holy fuck

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Re: MacDougal Diss Response lol

Postby <Stiiccy> » Apr 27th, '09, 03:07

thats wuss up... :y:
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Re: MacDougal Diss Response lol

Postby Solace » Apr 27th, '09, 03:14

Wow pwned.

I told you would get owned Scotty :whistle:
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Re: MacDougal Diss Response lol

Postby Xray » Apr 27th, '09, 08:42

That was basic but very smooth, flow was just in your face type thing can't avoid it. Good response man, I think Scotty did it for fun though, you did too? cool cool.
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Re: MacDougal Diss Response lol

Postby Steve Spag » Apr 27th, '09, 09:49

Sick stuff bro. Was really feelin' some of those punches, and the flow was damn near perfect! James takes this one.
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Re: MacDougal Diss Response lol

Postby Arabian Shady » Apr 27th, '09, 16:37

dude that shit went crazy half way thru, wiked stuff :y:
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Re: MacDougal Diss Response lol

Postby mcZu » Apr 27th, '09, 16:45

This is not bad; pretty basic rhymes, flow was insane though. Deffinitly better then Scot's diss.
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Re: MacDougal Diss Response lol

Postby MC Anonymous » Apr 27th, '09, 18:31

LMFAO I knew James was going to bring heat as soon as I saw the thread solace made.
I know this though, James didn't even try. If he did things would've been better, I even think it's safe to assume he keystyled this to be honest cause' it's not up to par with other shit I've seen him do when we would battle. :y:
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Re: MacDougal Diss Response lol

Postby James R. » Apr 27th, '09, 19:24

Thanks for the comments. No Anon I didn't try, yeah Sajjad it was pretty much for shits and gigs, and yes Anon I just key'd it up as a topic. Not even saved on my comp lol
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Re: MacDougal Diss Response lol

Postby Ice_Scarred » Apr 29th, '09, 01:42

Dammm you massacred Scotty boy....
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