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The Rise of The Fallen; Intro Of Witness Protection

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The Rise of The Fallen; Intro Of Witness Protection

Postby MC Anonymous » Apr 29th, '09, 11:56

New persona introduction. Will record when my mic is fixed...


Witness with the fuckin' shotty bout to make a pile of bodies
walkin' when they try to shot me and I go and get my glock see
and release the street speed that unleash demons in me
speaking of these, I unleash my semen like submarines
and I'll white out your flames when I'm spittin with propaine
with cocaine I deside pain is as the clounds when it rains
Fuck a stigma with my trigga I am quicker with the finger
Celine singer tones comin' when I bring her to the heater
Leavin' bleedin', seepin' as a heathen, decieven with these hands
squeezin' the clip like a barber, the author of what I'm seeing
fuck the preachin', fuck the leechin, fuck all of you dick suckers
you trick huggers, my sluggers bust slugs at each other
peace brothers, I am smothered in what I believe to be
when I receive my kness quiver and all I need to do is breathe
I see, I touch when I brush upon the canvas with the lust
and when I'm asked if I trust, I simply cock back and bust
my inner fury entices the vices I disguise with my iris
you couldn't surprise this, I've seen and won all the prizes
I walk with my head in flames, I talk when I'm dead in lanes
I stalk when I'm deading names, you fucks will just go insane
brain movements, motions, emotions, thoughts in locomotion
I am speaking as an ocean, my cortex is deep in lotion
cause and effects, I expect the tech will check me next
when my neck is vexed, the text switches, I am dead as a speck
Witness burried in his closet, just a pawn inside his pocket
when the glocks back I cock it, I'm the driver in his cockpit
I'm the one who shoots the wigga's, i'm the sun with booth skills slicker
I'm the street fusion of pollution inside Anonymous' trigga's
see me in the relfection, decieve me with your lessons
I rotate my neck 360 degrees to supress all your questions
Intentional unintentional, disregard my existance
I'll just fight back with resistance, Anonymous you brought this
synonomous when I fought spit, I just bounce back like techno
lets go, gloves off I'll battle to the death and on like a necro
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: The Rise of The Fallen; Intro Of Witness Protection

Postby noel » Apr 30th, '09, 04:07

:D :D :D
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Re: The Rise of The Fallen; Intro Of Witness Protection

Postby MC Anonymous » May 2nd, '09, 02:35

Bump
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: The Rise of The Fallen; Intro Of Witness Protection

Postby Ice_Scarred » May 3rd, '09, 03:50

As lyrical as always. Rhymes were sick. This new gimmick you got seems pretty interesting. The beginning sounded G, but it mellowed out toward the middle and went into an interesting direction. So this your new alter ego, Cuzz? 9 / 10 for me. I thought this drop was pretty dope.
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