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3 A.M. type of shit... UPDATED

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3 A.M. type of shit... UPDATED

Postby Jay-19 » May 4th, '09, 00:52

ADDED A SECOND VERSE

I was listening to 3 A.M. before and felt the urge to write some horror rap shit, and this was the result:

if you're crazy as Jay son, you're related to Jason
check in to the psych ward, place my face on the table
I'm yelling loud you came from space to invade us
then I killed a few while they debated what sane is
keep saying please save us I'm afraid of 'em prayers
I had to walk away because my shirt wasn't stainless
pissed angels keep hating but I'm fighting for Satan
it's like I'm fading away 'cause you tell me "restrain it"
lately I've been eating brain matter 'cause it's tasty
classified as crazy, these faces wants to waste me
shit, don't panic, I'm schizophrenic, get used to us
a few of us. some are eating uterus, chewing puss
viewing us as horrible monster, say we're diabolical
but I say I'm at my full senses and my mind is logical
got caught up in the part of playing horror film stars
and I'm driving in the movie that was starring a car

slit wrists on the witness who affected the sentance
told the jury that on chirstmas I disected an infant
was instantly sent to prison hid scissors in my hands
and every damn inmate will be pissing in their pants
escaped from prison went home to slash neighbours
caught again fast they said there's the gas chamber
but then the executioner said I'm already polluted
I don't think about that evil stuff instead I just do it
with toxic in the oxygen rocks up in my socks again
the executioner, I'm knocking him and lock him in
stuck a pen in his neck and then drank his blood up
cut up the warden who told my mom I'm a fuck up
stuck a severed dick in his ass and took a snapshot
and looking at it later wonder what's it attached on
I'm thinking that's wrong, it isn't correct now is it?
my sickness is sickening the wicked me, listeners


Copyright motherfuckers... :smoking:
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Re: 3 A.M. type of shit...

Postby DaKidLilj » May 4th, '09, 03:53

tuff shit man i loved it
Eminem - Infinite

Ayo, my pen and paper cause a chain reaction
To get your brain relaxing, a zany acting maniac in action
A brainiac in fact son, you mainly lack attraction
You look insanely whack when just a fraction of my tracks spun
My rhyming skills got you climbing hills
I travel through your mind into you spine like siren drills
I'm sliming grills of roaches, with sprayed on disinfectants
Twist the necks of rappers 'til their spinal column disconnects
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Re: 3 A.M. type of shit...

Postby ohimesama » May 4th, '09, 04:32

wow how nice
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Re: 3 A.M. type of shit...

Postby Jay-19 » May 4th, '09, 08:43

Thanks guys.. :happy:
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Re: 3 A.M. type of shit...

Postby Arabian Shady » May 4th, '09, 11:06

dude that was pretty damn dope man, structure was sick, flow was excellent , some lines stood out clearly
sick shit man :y:
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: 3 A.M. type of shit... UPDATED

Postby Jay-19 » May 4th, '09, 17:38

Come on, give me some feedback people.
It's not often I post in the creative writing section... :8)
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Re: 3 A.M. type of shit... UPDATED

Postby dbeauluvswomen » May 5th, '09, 05:12

crazy
love the rhyme scheme
we should collab on some murder shit
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Re: 3 A.M. type of shit... UPDATED

Postby Jay-19 » May 5th, '09, 13:23

dbeauluvswomen wrote:crazy
love the rhyme scheme
we should collab on some murder shit



No doubt man!
That would be awesome!
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