Hip Hop

[mcZu]

This was originally a collabo with Mc Anonymous, we don't know if this'll be ever recorded because my quality sucks and his mic broke (rip). Anyways this is my verse and the chorus, feedback appreciated as always.

Emcee Zu – Hip Hop
Instrumental: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aP4uJvL1Kbs

Rappers these days are something like bike brands;
Screaming: ‘Ya Ma, ha’ in each song they write and;
Talking about coke sales like the navy sells dope,
Dude, whatever floats your boat, so…
Everybody ate some dude with a nine; well... at least in their rhymes.
So where is the ten, eleven and twelve in ya’ll lines?
Or can’t these so called gangsters count; well this count’s
Like lower prices, hip hop should contain some vocal wise shit.
Lyrics that make you think beyond the one-line punch;
Physics should be racking their brains over our rhyming puns.
Rhymes should stimulate or tease the brain like Joell;
Instead rappers go weezy’s way instead of a big L’s
They’re a tad-ris-ky; so they sniff a line and grab an L
Trying to reach the top to sell; well…
They claim to be real, like peace between Palestine and Israel [Never]
So they focus on hooks instead of bars; still…

[Chorus: 2x]
…Hip Hop breaths; it’s in critical need,
For a heart donor; so we gotta loan her
Our spirit to show her, that…
We still got the heart to bring real rap back…

[Xray]

Damn I love that beat, haven't heard it in a while, ill shit. It was good, wasn't too spectacular but nice. Lotta lines I can agree on like "Instead rappers go weezy’s way instead of a big L’s"

Chorus was good too, I felt it. Im just wondering how you flowed it, cause I don't know how to.