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Inspired By Eminem

Postby MC Anonymous » May 8th, '09, 02:50

I'll back talk you like my spine has a mouth
the rhymes that I shout devour, designed as a drought
Ingenius spittin' seamless, rippin', whippin these hits
slippin' between this, clips will leave you beamless
Intoxicate, UHAUL boxing hate, inclined to rhyme,
your glocks are fake, my mind land mines explode in time
like spock I'm great, the intellectual techin' individuals
my respect endin' lyricals with typical fire I spit at you
just rippin' crews; abuse with flows to show that I'm gold
with ho's I know that they bold, so I inject this cold
semen in they vaginal creases, diseases spread in they fetus
pregnant heads will be beaten; leavin' them to be bleedin'
I'll crusify, your crew then hides; I'll blue your sides,
who knew I'm high as the blue full sky, got voodoo eyes
to see through lies, my DNA you need to play, I'm here as me
no fearing G's, I bleed for days, how you gonna strike fear in me
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Inspired By Eminem

Postby Ka0t1c » May 8th, '09, 03:29

i like the way you wrote this! :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Inspired By Eminem

Postby MC Anonymous » May 8th, '09, 11:13

Thanks
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Inspired By Eminem

Postby Drama Setter » May 8th, '09, 11:36

Hey , You rap good man . keep it up gangsa....
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Re: Inspired By Eminem

Postby Solace » May 8th, '09, 22:12

drama setter wrote:Hey , You rap good man . keep it up gangsa....

Yes Anonymous is a word up gangsa.

Good shit dude, really man you know I mean it :y:
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Re: Inspired By Eminem

Postby Ice_Scarred » May 9th, '09, 23:52

Great, Great, Great. The rhyme scheme is sexy as hell, the content is lyrical, and the flow is bananas. Keep it up Anon!
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