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Multi-land ft. McZu

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Multi-land ft. McZu

Postby Spyder » May 15th, '09, 22:44

Spyder
Villainous when I’m spillin this when I contain the williness
To write rhymes, nice try, my thigh will meet your right eye.
I’m a nice guy, shooting you from a unicycle, the newest idol
To the suicidal every time you try to do what I do.
Got my shoes on tight, now whose gone fight?
Welcome to my chess game you’ll lose pawn toknight.
I shoot guys with foolish pride,use knives and abuse wives
Choose wise, cuz you hang around queers like fruit flies.
I’m comin off like parachute ties, your fuckin done
Stuffin guns above the tongues of your loved ones.
Word wizard at my craft known as the rap mathematician
Split you in 22 like long division but still half is missin.
Mad magician, make your career disappear like bloodstains
Lyrics flood brains and got you blocked like tub drains.
Mud veins, dirty inside and out, Ima ignite the doubt
When you listen to the fuckin shit that I rhyme about.
Now watch as I light the couch, on fire Im inside ur house.
I don’t eat my raps but I do spit some rough rhymes
Never snorted coke but Ive been known to cough lines
But half the time I don’t know where I am its asinine.
Shove fags in armoires and tell em to come out the closet
Make a rap deposit, cuz any skill you had you lost it.
Assaultin emos just so that I could beat em to the punch
Gimme the seeds of dutch, fuck smokn I eat that shit for lunch.
Diseased knees on crutch, while I keep feedin off your guts
These tricks fall in ruts, if u think u have bigger balls ur nuts.

HOOK - Welcome to mulit-land where multiple men die
rip out tear ducts, put em in my eyes, then cry
the Zu let out the Spyder, makin up for spent time
represent crimes, lyrically, with multiple rhymes.


McZu
On a track with Spyder; leave ya in vertigo,
8 doctors around you in the ER, we have mad verbal flow;
Opposite of health, a sentence puts you on death row-
Even dear Santa knows it yo, your a Ho- yeah Ho-Ho;
A stealth mode; being a vigilante with words
Villain to hero in each verse; we teach and curse
You reach but can’t comprehend this sick verse,
Compensate and rehearse; hence you fade away like Sue
You can’t play Zu, this aint no game boy so drop the act fool;
Before the cartridge cardiac arrests you; call it a heart cop
No officer; talking about a chest theft ock,
So just rest; not in peace, like your body, yes you a no-body;
When I puzzle with ya whole anatomy, my goal is way to far to see-
Your just charcoal for my fire; yes me- you can’t test me geez;
Strong like an Ox, forth knocking on the Knox; your pop,
No substance, you say nothing at all – just stop;
Behind the mixing I can clearly hear the ‘pen’ drop.
If hiphop was a needle spinning a record; you’re the haystack-
Realness is lost in you, for the record your way-wack;
Stop pretending, your days-end, your no thug, just a victim for a slug-
Each single line you say is a no matter filler;
Only charges you got are the battery re-fillers, fake killers-
Leave ya Darth Vader-ed, this metal alloy is a body invader,
You’ll be seeing double like attack of the clones fazed ya;
You can’t fuck with Zu, like the DJ with Lindsay Lohan-
My lines slice through each verse you drop like the mutant Logan…


HOOK - Welcome to mulit-land where multiple men die
rip out tear ducts, put em in my eyes, then cry
the Zu let out the Spyder, makin up for spent time
represent crimes, lyrically, with multiple rhymes.
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Re: Multi-land ft. McZu

Postby Slim Zaddy » May 16th, '09, 18:17

that's tight for real .. i liked it .. flow is to the point , good collab from both of ya guys , keep it up :y:
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Re: Multi-land ft. McZu

Postby Spyder » May 16th, '09, 21:04

thanks zaddy :y: glad sumone gives sum feedback around here :whistle:
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Re: Multi-land ft. McZu

Postby J Roc » May 17th, '09, 08:03

Both was Niceee ... particularily liked spyder's verse.
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Re: Multi-land ft. McZu

Postby Spyder » May 17th, '09, 23:08

thanks playa
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