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ZuNonymous; 28 Bars of Death.

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ZuNonymous; 28 Bars of Death.

Postby MC Anonymous » May 18th, '09, 19:08

Emcee Zu
Lyrical we are biblical, physical you haters can’t lift your own pencils when we fight mental,
You are theatrical rappers, dramatize in XL sizes, theoretical you haters suck; however, see
Practical these haters give more brain then the library of congress in Washington D.C.
In mathematical sense; you all are tampon tampered rappers who don’t make sense(cents);That’s why you’re pulling ya strings and dwell in the red with imaginary numbered things -yes-.
The pen is a living entity on it’s own that blasts, everyone that commits blasphemy –in fact:
Blasting at us, that is blasphemous fast warded to the power of infinite facts, losing a mismatch.
A horizontal eight, our lyrical horizon is beyond that of you low life hopeless premature apes,Apocalypse eclipsed when I clipped my epical notebook with an ink clip, our opponents stiff;
Rigor mortis regulates the metamorphism from movable to immovable incapable victims,
ZuNonymous’ lyricism is beyond the looks like x-ray’s; so we blitz next ask SaJJad we stay sicker.
Ominous union of master craft crafted into lyrical content, we a mysterious rap continentYou haters make me tired like continental products, lyrics monumental in a bigger picture;
Zu and Anonymous – Sue us and we make you run home player like standing across a pitcher.

Emcee Anonymous
Flyin' smoothy, plates and booty rotatin' around my hemisphere like aliens
My cum is pails of sin, uranium bombs explodin', sending me to hell again
Tell me when; I'm an ''IceKilla'' who leaves ''Ice_Scarred'' with nice bars
my rhymes hard, I'm ''Kaotic'' cause I spray optics, without rhyme guard
I ''neversnooze'' and never lose, leave ya green with envy like ''yoshi'' with my letters too
I'll sever you, ZuNonymous got the better crew, leave ya in ''Solace'' when I'm through'
The lyrical ''spyder'', spittin' Venom like I ate marvel comics, I'll never stop it
got lights you can only see from forests through ''Chet'' "Star's'' Optics
perfomin' ''Illegal Heists'' with legal strikes, makin' ''Life Rise'' like a cockpit
spittin' Rhymes in ''4D'', you whore sees and sucks on my spherical objects
I ''C Game'' and these lames couldn't get G names by Green bay
my heat flames like ''SA Diablo'', and I end energy with vocals like Green Day
NamePlay Time, I'm a ''MC?Maybe..'', just using skills God gave me
So I'll stay an ''MC,Anonymous'' until this ''McZ'sU to save me...
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: ZuNonymous; 28 Bars of Death.

Postby Spyder » May 18th, '09, 20:25

ahhah that was pretty dope from u both thanks for the shout out :b: but Zu i couldnt really flow that great to it, maybe its just me though. but Anon i liked the flow and structure on that. but both had high complexity and vocab good work :y:
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Re: ZuNonymous; 28 Bars of Death.

Postby Ice_Scarred » May 19th, '09, 01:18

Anon's nameplay went hard. Both of you guys came extremely lyrical. Vocabulary was vivid and the content was flames. I liked both of yours equally. Damm...i wish I could spit shyt like that. I'm keep working at it. But god dayyumm, that shit was tight. Keep dropping, definitely.
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Re: ZuNonymous; 28 Bars of Death.

Postby Solace » May 20th, '09, 02:11

That was fucking amazing, for real. Loved everything, but I couldn't quite concentrate on McZu's because of structure and flow. I had no clue how it would go but I felt Anonymous' better. Enjoyed the creativity of MC Anonymous' too. I read like half of McZu's cause with that structure it makes me feel like I'm reading a story that just randomly rhymes here and there and I got bored but it was dope no doubt.
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