NEW Solace - Done Playing Games

[Solace]

[Verse 1]
I'm in the position where I ain't getting fucked with,
In the sort of state where I ain't gunna be ducking,
Under any flames, any shots, I'm taking them direct,
No pills I'll go and take them bullets out of my neck,
With my bare two hands, cut and coated with blood,
Mud stained clothes, forehead wetter than a flood,
I'll stay strong, keep fighting, 'til I'm dead and above,
In Heaven, while rotting in the ground, I had it enough,
So there ain't no failure, maybe I'm overconfident,
In this world of snakes, I ain't the one whos talkin' shit,
Known to retaliate if you lead to me to that position,
But for now you shut up and just fucking listen.

[Chorus]
Don't give a fuck, take all your words and I eat them,
Spit 'em back out, chew again, then I repeat them,
Right back at you, holding land right where I stand,
Fighting the grand with only a fucking mic in the hand.

[Verse 2]
Verse 2, I've cursed through most of my birth dude,
Leaving with more fire than needed to burn you,
Stare at me at all times, like I ain't a fucking human,
You stupid? Get your dick outta here before you lose it,
Rap was my venting tool, wouldn't shout shit in public,
Pretending people would love it, while shit was above it,
But it got me through a lot of shit going on in my life,
An anti-depressed when people was gone in my life,
Some people got the fucking nerve to talk shit,
Act like it was an accident and keep on walking,
Some people are fake, like a camera was watching,
Tell them homies I was shit, but telling me I was toxic.

[Chorus]
Don't give a fuck, take all your words and I eat them,
Spit 'em back out, chew again, then I repeat them,
Right back at you, holding land right where I stand,
Fighting the grand with only a fucking mic in the hand.

[Ice_Scarred]

This piece was pretty tough. You went pretty hard on here. My favorite part was the chorus though. Chorus was hot. Good drop, brah.

[Slim Zaddy]

dope shit man , i loved it actually .. chorus was the best ,, gd job here solace.. keep it up

[Solace]

This piece was pretty tough. You went pretty hard on here. My favorite part was the chorus though. Chorus was hot. Good drop, brah.

Thanks man glad you liked it, I appreciate it.

chorus was dope man nice lyrics which I could feel the emotion in

just a suggestion though, you structure everything similiar, you should have a piece where you experiment with where your rhymes are, but it takes nothing away from this piece man, good job you make me want to drop shit lol

Thanks dude glad you checked on it and glad you think its nice. Yeah I know what you mean about similar structure and flow. Ill try something like that definitely in the future and when the time comes I'll give you cred. for reminding me on practicing that shit

dope shit man , i loved it actually .. chorus was the best ,, gd job here solace.. keep it up

Glad you liked it z_em. Yeah the chorus was originally a part of verse 1 but MC Anon liked it so much he thought it should go as chorus.

[Spyder]

pretty sick man i was really feelin the chorus, but the verses were pretty tight too man, keep it up

[Solace]

pretty sick man i was really feelin the chorus, but the verses were pretty tight too man, keep it up

Good to hear dude, happy that you liked it

[Spyder]

cant wait to see what u come up with next

[gutawafang]

This is you.

I think everything's there as usual. Yeah.

[Solace]

cant wait to see what u come up with next

You sly bastard lol.

This is you.

I think everything's there as usual. Yeah.

Thanks dude!

[<Stiiccy>]

dope ass shit...loved the way you structured it

[Solace]

Thanks dude

[mcZu]

Nice piece; I enjoyed, don't really have any complaints. Of course I could criticize some points, but it seems good. So good job oMarkevelli

[Solace]

Thanks Zu

[classthe_king]

Wow this is the first time ive got on the creative writing forum but damb Solace your a dog at rapping. Im going to be going through and finding some more stuff from you. The flow was insane.

[Solace]

Wow this is the first time ive got on the creative writing forum but damb Solace your a dog at rapping. Im going to be going through and finding some more stuff from you. The flow was insane.

Really? Thanks. I have a lot of time to improve tho, it feels good to see someone say I'm dope and I'm only 14. Again thanks