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Sorry My Lord

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Sorry My Lord

Postby Ka0t1c » May 21st, '09, 00:48

i should be postin the most and never lose focus cuz i notice my foes choose to be poachin
i used to be coachin but my motives and motions showed no devotion to expose them
well, i'm supposed to, i've been chosen so i must approach then, and for months i've been frozen
i don't know what's really goin on at this forum for the moment but no more i'm ignorin my chore
i'm rollin forward i'm warning with war, i'm swarming all four corners, down pouring bullets galore
now they're fully airborne, quarantine doors before you are transformed to a foreign new form
cuz i'm the bull with the horns disposin the thorns from this part of the world, sorry my lord...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Sorry My Lord

Postby Fa-Q » May 21st, '09, 03:00

damn man...that was dope...make a song with that crazy ass flow
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Re: Sorry My Lord

Postby Ka0t1c » May 21st, '09, 03:11

haha, thanx, maybe i'll try that!
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Sorry My Lord

Postby gutawafang » May 21st, '09, 10:00

it's damn cool. :y: leaving me speechless
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Re: Sorry My Lord

Postby Ka0t1c » May 21st, '09, 11:57

thanx, it's funny tho cuz i wrote this up quick as i was thinking while my other lyrics took me awhile to write and still no feedback's on those so i'm confuseds to why that is... :confusion:
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