alright it's been a while, go easy titled "Her Fair Juliet"

[Inzanity]

(Intro)
"A glooming peace this morning with it brings
The sun, for sorrow, will not show his head.
Go hence, to have more talk of these sad things.
Some shall be pardoned, and some punished.
For never was a story of more regret
Then that of Juliet and her fair Juliet."

(Pre-chours)
(I'm sorry momma)
Just a small town girl, living in a lonely world
(I never meant to hurt you)
She took the midnight train going anywhere
(I never meant to make you cry)
Just a city girl, born and raised in north L.A.
(but tonight)
she took the midnight train going anywhere
(I'm coming out the closet)
Don't stop... believin'
(Oh tell me why, why does it have to be)
hold on to that feeling

(chours)
Why does it have to be wrong or right?
Why does it have to be one way or the other?
Won't somebody please, please tell me.
Why does it have to be black or white?
Why do we have to hurt one to love another?
Oh, tell me why?
Why does it have to be?

(Verse 1)
when the sun goes down,
and the moon is full
they run the town,
not knowing everyone soon will know
so they keep a secret of a love that's sinfull
sneaking out their bedroom window's
soon they'll be in a war that they can't win though
they grow stronger with every touch and every kiss
forced to hide the love within
they feel so much but never wish
to make known a love that's sin
trapped in the closet,
cuz' if anyone found out it would cost them
so from fears within the tears are shed
By Juliet and her fair Juliet
but never to regret, a hidden love kept a secret

(Pre-chours)
(I'm sorry momma)
Just a small town girl, living in a lonely world
(I never meant to hurt you)
She took the midnight train going anywhere
(I never meant to make you cry)
Just a city girl, born and raised in north L.A.
(but tonight)
she took the midnight train going anywhere
(I'm coming out the closet)
Don't stop... believin'
(Oh tell me why, why does it have to be)
hold on to that feeling

(chours)
Why does it have to be wrong or right?
Why does it have to be one way or the other?
Won't somebody please, please tell me.
Why does it have to be black or white?
Why do we have to hurt one to love another?
Oh, tell me why?
Why does it have to be?


(Verse 2)
after making love, their sneaking in
at the break of dawn, with secret's kept
it hurts so much to leave again
it's their first true love how could it be a sin
their love is what keep's them going
when their feeling weak and hopeless
no matter how hard they try they can't defeat emotions
who is to say that it's not true love
and who are they who believe they've got to judge
their parents think that their just the best of friends
if only their mom's and dad's knew secrets kept with in
but in silence they stay, as their finding their way
so from fears within the tears are shed
By Juliet and her fair Juliet
but never to regret, a hidden love kept a secret

(Pre-chours)
(I'm sorry momma)
Just a small town girl, living in a lonely world
(I never meant to hurt you)
She took the midnight train going anywhere
(I never meant to make you cry)
Just a city girl, born and raised in north L.A.
(but tonight)
she took the midnight train going anywhere
(I'm coming out the closet)
Don't stop... believin'
(Oh tell me why, why does it have to be)
hold on to that feeling

(chours)
Why does it have to be wrong or right?
Why does it have to be one way or the other?
Won't somebody please, please tell me.
Why does it have to be black or white?
Why do we have to hurt one to love another?
Oh, tell me why?
Why does it have to be?


(Verse 3)
Mom and dad are leaveing for the weekend she calls her fair Juliet to sleep in
but big bro is aressted, they come back early how could she have guessed it
mom walks up the stairs into her room and unnatural affection is brought to her attention

(Skit)
("A glooming peace this morning with it brings)
Paula: Spencer, get Ashley to leave!
(The sun, for sorrow, will not show his head.)
Ashley: I can hear you, Paula.
(Go hence, to have more talk of these sad things.)
Paula: Tell her to leave!
(Some shall be pardoned, and some punished.)
Ashley: Do you want me to leave?
(For never was a story of more regret)
Spencer: No.
(Then that of Juliet)
Arthor: It's gonna be okay
(and her fair Juliet.")
Spencer: No it's not, I love her.
(END SKIT)

Momma said it's not true love, daddy said it's who she was
So mamma rejects and daddy accepts Juliet and her fair Juliet
Soon mamma will see it's destiny and she can't change what's meant to be
So Juliet and her fair Juliet are never to regret a love no longer kept in secret


(Pre-chours)
(I'm sorry momma)
Just a small town girl, living in a lonely world
(I never meant to hurt you)
She took the midnight train going anywhere
(I never meant to make you cry)
Just a city girl, born and raised in north L.A.
(but tonight)
she took the midnight train going anywhere
(I'm coming out the closet)
Don't stop... believin'
(Oh tell me why, why does it have to be)
hold on to that feeling

(chours)
Why does it have to be wrong or right?
Why does it have to be one way or the other?
Won't somebody please, please tell me.
Why does it have to be black or white?
Why do we have to hurt one to love another?
Oh, tell me why?
Why does it have to be?

[neversnooze]

hey,

this is a beautiful piece you written, simple to read and the genre of this i presume is more pop than rap. if you can sing id advise you to record it!!

post more often and great job

[Fa-Q]

i dont like the Cleaning out the closet cover...sorry man

[gutawafang]

It sounds poetic. But I think I have to listen to it to judge it in terms of the flow and structure.

It's quite good.