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Welcome To My Nightmare

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Welcome To My Nightmare

Postby mceddie » May 21st, '09, 11:22

every day i try to turn my life around
but the mirrors still reflect a clown
premonitions with out permission
got my life flipped upside down
a major case of "Stuck in the past"
Got nostalgia comin out of my ass
deja vu is all i view
im trapped at the bottom of this flask
"you'll never amount to anything eddie, you're a fucking loser"
yeah fuck you too, im here to get revenge like freddie fucking krueger
this isnt childs play, so grow up and grow a fuckin pair
you've just entered elm street, welcome to my fuckin nightmare

fool me once shame on you, fool me twice ill fuckin kill you
ill be the one you see drivin in the rain checkin your rearview
yeah im stuck in the past, cause i got nothing to look forward too
but hey, its okay, we'll be resting in pieces when im through with me and you
yeah so i got a sleeping problem, only ocasionally
cause when i close my eyes, sometimes i picture myself bleed
it keeps me up at night,not gonna lie, usually till 3
its 3 right now, and im writin this just so you can see

hook

im crazy
im crazy
understand me
be more understanding

im crazy
im crazy
but its just cause i am me
so dont try to change me

work in progress, opinions greatly appreciated :)
i know the hook is pretty simple, i wanted it that way. :)
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Re: Welcome To My Nightmare

Postby Ka0t1c » May 21st, '09, 12:17

the 1st verse is the best part, i thought the chorus sucked and the second verse is mediocre but that all can be fixed. 6/10
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Welcome To My Nightmare

Postby mceddie » May 21st, '09, 14:23

thanks for the feedback, you're right the hook aint much but that's really what i was going for as i said :P
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