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Medevil

Postby MC Anonymous » May 21st, '09, 12:04

Got diseases better leave this before I squeeze clips
peace bitch, tease this I'll blow you to pieces
known to beat bitches for cheap riches
palms itches, use teeth to scratch, now taste my stiches
I kill hoes with ill flows
like dildo's I stick and thrust dykes who don't like my skills yo
you fuckers really make me chuckle
I shove so many fists in ya mouth you could use ya teeth as your knuckles
those who don't step up get fucked
let my lead buck, rob all for dough like I stole bread trucks
I'm on top lettin' bombs drop, rob pawn shops
till dough is gone, patrol green like lawn cops
Rip backs with gripped techs, I split necks with this text
who's next?, I spit fire, yall spit specks
I lead people, knives bred evil with a cerebeal
deeper when I led steaples to the land of Medevil

I'm so sick and tired, of being a liar
So I'm gonna die when I lie next to wires
ignite the fuse I use to abuse
the anger inside hung my neck by a noose x2

It's medevil, tie ya heels so it lies on wheels
crying steel peels ya ankles, feed it to you for a meal
rip wrists as spit drips, blood my lips get
cannable animal, rippin his heart from his chest
Tie you to a cruisifx, my crew of six will blue ya shit
blindfolded, you feel clueless hits from shoeless kicks
grip the exposed ankle bone, ya voice crackles tones
so I smack ya dome, and rip the fuckin' shit out whole
arteries parting these streams of blood I see
looked like a dud to me, so I brought out thee
Big axe to make a wig mask, I must rip fast
first I grip glass, and whip fast, now you gotta split ass
You tired and ready to die, blood will steadly rise
tell you head your goodbye's, you will be in the sky
I decapitate at a faster rate, then I masterbate
to the bloodshed, it's so good, I must casserate

I'm so sick and tired, of being a liar
So I'm gonna die when I lie next to wires
ignite the fuse I use to abuse
the anger inside hung my neck by a noose x2
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Medevil

Postby Ice_Scarred » May 22nd, '09, 01:06

I like this. Good structure, great rhymes and content was good. I don't like it as much as your other work, but it is definitely a great drop. Looking forward 2 your next drop!
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Re: Medevil

Postby Fa-Q » May 22nd, '09, 04:16

wow that lawn cops lin was amazing good stuff man...
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Re: Medevil

Postby Solace » May 25th, '09, 22:44

Just sick man. I cant say no more and I cant wait to hear the audio result.
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Re: Medevil

Postby classthe_king » May 26th, '09, 21:31

Crazy shit, really good rhymes loved the:
I'm on top lettin' bombs drop, rob pawn shops
till dough is gone, patrol green like lawn cops
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Tie you to a cruisifx, my crew of six will blue ya shit
blindfolded, you feel clueless hits from shoeless kicks
those are some crazy lines
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Medevil

Postby Ka0t1c » May 27th, '09, 03:41

good lines in there! btw, it's Medieval... ne ways good content
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Medevil

Postby Solace » May 28th, '09, 00:39

Kaotic wrote:good lines in there! btw, it's Medieval... ne ways good content

I think he means Me-Devil not Medieval.
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