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Postby mcZu » May 21st, '09, 22:12

When ever their ‘shit-come’ I laugh at their rhyme-scheme
‘cause their ‘friends’ can’t talk, so they stuck on a ‘sign-field’
They amount to nothing like the economy of Nigeria
Their amount of lyricism is lower then the winters in Siberia
So I shiver at their lyrics, unsophisticated musical limericks.
Their words are the same in each song like ideal communism
They communicate like primitive apes with no sense of lyricism
They change their standards each time like Raven Darkholme
Comparing them to me, is like comparing a dog to Holmes
Compressed mashed brain cells nameless frame ants-
Their hemispheres like a Hennessey bottle empty, near-
…a Mercedes they steer, embracing their fear which is perfectly clear
They act ignorant, stupid conglomerate, abusing music with
Zero percent of ingenious lines amusing the masses saying: ‘bitch.’
Impossible improbable probability rates say that they are musical
Them being smart is like a real unicorn pissing in numerous urinals
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
- Lupe Fiasco

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