LosT Soul (Feat.. JMG) New Shit

[Slim Zaddy]

(hook)x2
I have just lost my soul
i miss the good old days
when we used to cross roads
i should have looked both ways

Verse 1 ( Slim ZaDDy )
My scriptures are written lyrics that'll burn the gimmicks...
When you hear it I'll turn your image like your words dimished...
My soul yarns to conform a reform the rhythmic...
Your turn is finished, should've known I cant be learned or mimicked...
Like a mystic magician, my wizardry cripples all competition...
I'm like Jesus on a mission to bring you all of god's religions...
I would open your mind, If my lyrics could cut like an incision...
I'm divine in sight so I can see truth through the lies in vision...
Even though emcees say I just aint dope enough...
No hope for luck, the road I chose at the fork is rough...
I got kids callin me out like “Zaddy” your flow just sucks"...
Shit makes me want to choke my throat till my vocals erupt...
Check my expression when pressure is pressed against me...
You attempt to tempt me but the gauges have measured empty...
I'm in school with kids, like an adult trapped in elementary...
This is the documentary of a an emcee whos words are alimentary...
But now sadness absorbs my status, im conformed in madness...
Thoughts are morbid, tragic; my soul's been scorched to ashes...
Body stored in blackness, these visions are horrid lapses...
Playing in my head...torturous sights of corpse in masses...
I just wanted you to feel the nostalgic spirit resident thats evident...
A style so intelligent, its apparent, wack shit here is irrelevant...
Evidence shows perfection when combining the elements...
It takes dedication, development of a mind beyond intelligence...

(Hook) x2
I have just lost my soul
i miss the good old days
when we used to cross roads
i should have looked both ways

Verse 2 ( JMG)
livin on the edge i cant contain my dangerous habits
as a kid i ran with scissors then i played in traffic
perhaps i was just always chasing greater aspects
trying to escape the madness im trapped in my own existence
livin in the dark and i cant believe how cold its gettin
lookin back at the past all i see are ghost and witches
vivid, its left me unprepared also paranoid and ill
dont know where i start with all these void's to fill
tell me how do i climb out this hole that im livin in
cuz it seems the lights gettin dim and its flickerin
and im outta breath tryin to regain my stamina
im left with bruises cuz the pain can damage ya
and man ive been to all the way to hell and back
just tryin so hard to get myself on track and not dwell on that
wow things are startin to look up yeah i thought for sure
but its back to the drawlin board cuz rain is what there callin for

(Hook)x2

feedback would be appreciated,,,

[JMG]

nice

[lilrossy]

oi man, dis shits crazy. had a nice flow to it nd had good vocab, good work

[JMG]

bump

[J Roc]

Zaddy Was Decenttt ... But JMG , Damnn haha ... i liked the multies

"wow things are startin to look up yeah i thought for sure
but its back to the drawlin board cuz rain is what there callin for"

hah nicee

[Ka0t1c]

great chorus, great verse, JMG

[Slim Zaddy]

great chorus, great verse, JMG

thanks man for the feed ,,,,

Zaddy Was Decenttt ... But JMG , Damnn haha ... i liked the multies

"wow things are startin to look up yeah i thought for sure
but its back to the drawlin board cuz rain is what there callin for"

hah nicee

thanks j roc .. glad you liked it ,,,, thanks again

[JMG]

what he said

[Slim Zaddy]

what he said

who ?

[JMG]

I was co signin what you said my nig

[Slim Zaddy]

I was co signin what you said my nig

hahahaahha , it's okay bro ,, i was feelin dizzy and sick , so i didn’t focus ,,, and guys common ,, give us some feedback ,

[JMG]

word

[Solace]

Really great stuff by both of you May I ask, who wrote the chorus? I thought it was pretty nice, as it was simple yet effective which many rappers/writers may ruin a song with a crapper chorus.

[Slim Zaddy]

Really great stuff by both of you May I ask, who wrote the chorus? I thought it was pretty nice, as it was simple yet effective which many rappers/writers may ruin a song with a crapper chorus.

actually it's jmg ,, and i just edit it ,, and thanks for the feed solace ..