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5 STAR GENERALS ft. Solace,McZu,James R,Mc Anonymous

Postby Spyder » May 29th, '09, 00:19

Solace…here
McZu…here
Mc Anonymous…here
James R…here
Spyder…here
Let the battle begin!

Solace
Sweating but I'll finish this, just pure determination,
Watch me as I'm ripping this, just pure extermination,
When your back's to the wall, I scrap to the max limit,
Shit come out your mouth like your ass swallowed laxatives,
I got the tracks written and man I'm just rapping the facts,
Hand me an axe, kill some kids, then have me a snack,
I'm always killing in harmony and drilling in arteries,
These witnesses gotta bleed, bitch vicious you gotta be,
Killing low lifes working at pharmacies that gotta sleep,
Fuck karma please, try to get Jason to even slaughter me,
I think I just Relapsed, you fell off like Tha Carter III,
Trying new things, Dr. Lecter doesn't even bother me,
I fire in 360 rotation, bullets burst like masturbation,
Attack the nation with all of the free time that I'm wasting,
So just face it, look at the generals, it's the apocalypse,
Rocking this, while your bitches' throat is rocking dick.

McZu
General conglomerate, we sicker than cannibals on bong
Lyrical rated infinite with an eight dropped on it’s horizon
Punches leave ya vertigo like the vocab on a canibus song
It’s impossible to beat us like Gandhi with weapons on.
This 5-men lyrical squad is old-school in the future vortex-ed;
Con like code of conduct confuses the thesaurus contexts;
The beat will be King Kong-ed, ‘cause we kings on a warpath.
Our bars sharpened so our claws-set, your clothes for death
We will engage in a caged battle like before a wedding.
We don’t supply mercy, but our enemies will be demanding.
They breathe hard like Anakin with a mask, on high altitude
Solace miss places his enemies souls with a bullet longitude
Spyder comes with the eight armed gun play like Shiva squared
Multi unknown riffles in Anon’s hands leaves enemies hella scared
So you end up John Doe-ed due to James R’s sawed off shotty
Salute us, while Zu be placing an eagle on his pants like Armani.

Hook X2
We got flow like weaponry, we’re the best you see
Never meant to be tested your interested Inevitably.
We soldiers never should be tempted, stand next to me
Incredibly the 5 star generals arent what you expect to see.

James R
When I spit these tracks melt like an acid remix
Your whole squad come as hard as a flaccid penis
Don’t… test me boy get your chest destroyed
Cardiac incarceration you’re arrested boy
For the whack denominations all my tracks sit on your face and
Start detachin parts and places heart attacks are on your playlist
Revolvers and chains evolving my aim
I can’t take this shit right now so don’t start to complain
Once you’re part of the game you’re gonna get maimed
Got souls all on my chain dawg pardon the stains
I’m still fresher than a mother fucker can’t find another tougher
Yeah I get to cum up on her but I’ll never love her nuh uh
Allegedly my rhyming caught a couple felonies
But I’ma beat the charge that’s what anon is telling me
So for these up and comers that got they eyes set on me
Listen to J Roc shut the fuck up and lemme be

Mc Anonymous
Try to hurt me, put a curse on you purposely when I burst these
verses easily, breezy, spittin' and drippin blood, I'm thirsty
When I stop--- take ya joint and pop lock and drop it
cap optics, it's obvious you can never stop it
take it to the flow, show these people how I roll
stealing bowls is a pleasure like when I'm stealing souls
slitin and rippin when I'm grippin the clip and spittin
liftin spirits you hear it, your deaf in that position you sit in
knock ya balls off with a sawed off you all soft
type of punches yall spit, us MC's call coughs
rise you up to the skies, despised by God's eyes
now in hell beside my rhymes and dead lines
rip wayne's dread locks, your head pops when lead drops
so call cops or SWAT, robocop gets his bread swapped
fifty shots destroy fifty blocks by fifty glocks
150 thoughts to 1/8, cause 25 bodies dropped
A Five Star General like a vietnam youtube army man
my arms be grand, understand my arms strong like niel and lance

Spyder
My fuckin raps are like the skills that of a Green Beret
Seize the day, I’m makin the season change to freezin rain.
Diseased name, just speakin it will make your knees decay.
Fuckin sneeze and spray, off my fuckin weapon of voice
my method of choice is leavin you no less than destroyed
got you guessin the noise, when we come in like the marines,
fuck your pleas, the five of us flee to the scene by any means.
I make raps with my voice pounding, sound to please
Cuz for the five of us theres no boundaries, astounding
We’ll sneak upon you while your ass is sound asleep.
You cant escape me the 5 star generals are surrounding
the exit, get the floats get to the boat your drowning.
Your raps past the date theres no reason to procrastinate
Castin hate, lacerate your vertebrae theres no faster rate.
When the five of us collaborate we don’t exaggerate
Now calculate, we’ll give sumin for your ass to hate,
I’m talkin bout this lyrical porn for you to masturbate.

Hook X2
We got flow like weaponry, we’re the best you see
Never meant to be tested your interested Inevitably.
We soldiers never should be tempted, stand next to me
Incredibly the 5 star generals arent what you expect to see.
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Re: 5 STAR GENERALS ft. Solace,McZu,James R,Mc Anonymous

Postby Spyder » May 29th, '09, 00:41

hahha thanks man
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Re: 5 STAR GENERALS ft. Solace,McZu,James R,Mc Anonymous

Postby Ka0t1c » May 29th, '09, 00:42

good shit all of you guys, i liked the way James' verse was written, very well done

mc anon, i liked the clever line, "understand my arms strong like niel and lance"

spyder, great on the constant multies :y:

McZu, good vocab and imagination

solace, your verse was dark, i liked, "i'm always killing in harmony and drilling in arteries"
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: 5 STAR GENERALS ft. Solace,McZu,James R,Mc Anonymous

Postby MC Anonymous » May 29th, '09, 00:56

Thanks guys :y: :y:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: 5 STAR GENERALS ft. Solace,McZu,James R,Mc Anonymous

Postby mcZu » May 29th, '09, 01:10

Thanks for the feed guys, appreciate it :b:
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Re: 5 STAR GENERALS ft. Solace,McZu,James R,Mc Anonymous

Postby Solace » May 29th, '09, 01:12

Thanks for the feed and for real that was dope Spyder, MC Anonymous, McZu & James :worship:

PS. Haha me and McZu's verses blend in fucking perfectly (the rhyme scheme). Aplocalypse, rocking dick, conglomerate. :y:
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Re: 5 STAR GENERALS ft. Solace,McZu,James R,Mc Anonymous

Postby Young Luc » May 29th, '09, 01:18

i think you guys might get charged with 1st degree murder.. cuz all of you FUCKIN MURDERED that, just plain fire.

i wish i can rap like that,
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Re: 5 STAR GENERALS ft. Solace,McZu,James R,Mc Anonymous

Postby mcZu » May 29th, '09, 01:19

Solace wrote:Haha me and McZu's verses blend in fucking perfectly (the rhyme scheme). Aplocalypse, rocking dick, conglomerate. :y:


Great minds think alike ;)

Young Luc wrote:i think you guys might get charged with 1st degree murder.. cuz all of you FUCKIN MURDERED that, just plain fire.

i wish i can rap like that,


Thanks man, appreciate it. Don't give up, you'll get there. Just keep on writing.
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Re: 5 STAR GENERALS ft. Solace,McZu,James R,Mc Anonymous

Postby Young Luc » May 29th, '09, 01:30

if i had to pick my fav part, it would be the last 5 lines of Spyder's verse.
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Re: 5 STAR GENERALS ft. Solace,McZu,James R,Mc Anonymous

Postby Spyder » May 29th, '09, 01:51

thanks for the feed guys, glad u liked the verse Luc. and to Zu and solace i notied that and put his after yours :sweating: yea right that was some crazy luck i placed em there. but it worked out good lol
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Re: 5 STAR GENERALS ft. Solace,McZu,James R,Mc Anonymous

Postby Slim Zaddy » May 29th, '09, 12:16

sick collab , i liked all your verses , they are dope for real,, good job guys .. keep it up :y:
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Re: 5 STAR GENERALS ft. Solace,McZu,James R,Mc Anonymous

Postby mcZu » May 29th, '09, 15:22

Thanks Zaddy :y:
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Re: 5 STAR GENERALS ft. Solace,McZu,James R,Mc Anonymous

Postby Spyder » May 29th, '09, 20:40

thanks guys for all the feedback, and thank you to Zu Anon Solace and James man all of together made a fuckin great collab together, i hope we can do it again sumtime. reunite the 5 star generals :y:
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Re: 5 STAR GENERALS ft. Solace,McZu,James R,Mc Anonymous

Postby James R. » May 30th, '09, 00:27

Didn't even realize this shit got dropped lol. Thanks for all the comments people. Coleon and Kaotic especially :worship:

Tight collab. It came together better than I could have imagined since the only verse I saw was Spyder's lol. Good workin wit you guys.
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Re: 5 STAR GENERALS ft. Solace,McZu,James R,Mc Anonymous

Postby Spyder » May 30th, '09, 02:49

thanks James it was deff sick shit :y:
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