remember your goals

[Ka0t1c]

flow comes from the soul
so just let it roll
off the tip of your tongue
get comfortable, stay calm
then you're ready to go
yes, this is my song
and what is in-ev-it-able
are some battles along
but i'm never alone
for Armageddon Babylon will grow
we're all headin, it's wrong
to a dead end, i know
it's really sad, just be strong
and start grabbin ahold
or forever be gone to the devil below
cuz you'll never respond
as does a veg-et-able
the antidote is beyond
now catipult cuz a tether would halt
your effort, respond like an expert, exhalt
let pressure unload whatever's the measure, explode
to better your jolt like electrical volts
never be done, treasure your gold
that's number one, second have fun
remember your goals...

[classthe_king]

It's just an average verse to me. The rhyming was alright and the lyrics were average also. It needs to either be more complex or you need to be saying some really thought provoking shit.

[lady speedstik]

Well I actually thought it was a bit simple in the very beginning but then from the middle on it got better. You should put a little more into your lines though.

[Ka0t1c]

ok