Twisted Spirit (Short Piece)

[Solace]

Written to La Violencia by Life & Death Productions. Note that the Intro is supposed to be before the beat, like just on nothing and then the beat starts.

[Intro] (Whispered)
Look deeper in my mind, what is it about...
Don't doubt that lately I've been hitting a drout...
Lord save me before I succumb into my cravings...
Eating corpses on the daily, death in my daydreams...

[Verse]
Where you running? You know I'm going to catch you,
Rip off that tattoo on your back as I scratch you,
Attack you..."That guy's fucking mad dude!"
Rip out your eyeballs while writing rap tunes,
"Call the police, he's crazy!" And little sad too,
You could have had a future before I stabbed you,
The corpse in my closet, no remorse, I am honest,
Favorite part is hearing the whore yell "Stop it!",
No I ain't stopping, I've gone too far, I'll finish it,
Rip out your bones, drill to the cartilage and I lick the shit,
It's interesting, compassion, I am missing it,
But the gore that surrounds me is my natural stimulant,
Two infants, and six bitches with implants,
Shoving my dick in their ribs man I must be tripping.
I'm aware, I'm watching, not once am I blinking,
Run up on my terrace? Kid you weren't thinking.

[classthe_king]

Lol that's was sick dude, rhyming was great, just the whole thing was crazy.

[lady speedstik]

Lol that's was sick dude, rhyming was great, just the whole thing was crazy.

I agree, lol.

[Solace]

Thanks all of you

[preest]

nice man, I like the rhyming - I thought the "I'll finish it" and "I'll lick the shit" sounded a little forced but that may have just been the flow I was reading it, I'm sure its sicker when you say it

Nice verse though man

[Solace]

Thanks Preest, appreciate it

[James R.]

That was probably the best I've seen you do. I don't really have anything to complain about. Great job man.

[Slim Zaddy]

yea it's sick ,, solace ,, nice job bro ,, keep the good job up ,, i enjoyed it a lot ,, dude ,,

[Solace]

Thanks both of you guys! I appreciate your feed

[neversnooze]

when i read this it kind of reminded me of eminems "same song and dance". Well to the point, i really enjoyed your write bro. this was a sick verse solace, the flow went well from start to finish. the rhyming made it more enjoyable. 9/10

[Solace]

when i read this it kind of reminded me of eminems "same song and dance". Well to the point, i really enjoyed your write bro. this was a sick verse solace, the flow went well from start to finish. the rhyming made it more enjoyable. 9/10

Thanks Neversnooze

And let this be known that I wasn't trying to copy Eminem nor any other rapper here. Just kept going on some Hannibal-ish lyrics. Thank you all again for feeding

[Steve Spag]

Dope, dope shizit man! Rhyming was percise, as always, and you manage to bring out a wicked flow. What I like about your shit is you stick to your story, and it doesn't affect your wordplay. One of your best piece's man, really nice stuff.

[Solace]

Thanks Steve! Glad you liked it