Quick Rap 10 Bars

[Young Luc]

I'm Italian, born with strength and soccer skill/
flow so sick, it was on Doctor Phil/
swagger on, im wearing the wife beater/
i lead. call me the nice leader/
the haters just follow like twitter/
im a baller and a fire spitter/
taste of a pussy is sweet and bitter/
blow haters heads off when i pull the trigger/
my homies call me the tight wigger/
but im too kool for that, call me the White Nigger/

im busy with skool work i wrote this quickly.

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[Brandon S]

Probably better than anything you've posted here, but its still garbage

[Ice_Scarred]

Wow. Ain't bad. Could've been longer and had some more Swag Juice to it, but overall it was iight. Keep droppin.

[Solace]

I know your just starting this but it was wack. As Brandon said its your best but still wack.

[lilrossy]

not to bad. your lines were pretty weak nd nuttin really stood out. jus need mo practice.

[James R.]

Well that was garbage, and you're not gonna make a nitch for yourself as the white rapper who says nigga in his songs, so just stop. It was good to see you not treating us like we're retarded though. With all the caps lock seizures you tend to have and shit.