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Writer's Block

Postby James R. » Jun 8th, '09, 18:20

3 verses done in one take while at work to the Blueprint 2 beat. No hook on this shit. I'm finally outta my writers block. Enjoy it.

Ima take it back to the days before the writers block
Back when my name was synonymous with tight and hot
Back when my flow was known as the 1st wonder of the world
When I could write some hard shit that was smtn for the girls
Before the stress put all of these wrinkles on my brow
Before every other day dudes was reachin for the crown
Back when I wrote songs from inspiration in one take
Now I came back to be the installation of one faith
Infiltration of one's space yields... inflammation of one's face
Why try to please when bitches hate in the first place?
Fuck it, Ima do me I'll watch you do you
Word up to anonymous and props to Zu too
Wassup to my boy Solace I promise I'm bein honest
If I wasn't the tightest out you'd be next up for the harness
And on the real Spyder should take credit for my last drop
I was on the verge of thinkin that track was my last shot
But I can't stop now it got me outta the hole bitches
In just a couple years I'll be chokin the whole business
Made some deeper decisions got the game in a sleeper submission
And still I remain in an undefeated position
Nobody does it like I do it I designed myself
So convinced by my flow I rewind myself
Comin at me you might as well recline yourself
Cuz I murder fakers and let the truth define myself
So that's enough for the bible verses my title's perfect
Goin for the big fish it's time for the lines to surface
It's time for Goliath to quiet the david's throwin rocks at the throne
Who try denyin I'm on top of their dome
So stop it I'm home the god's back wit your ass on the cross
Usin lines to crucify any paths that I cross
Bringin all 7 sins to the forefront of the mind
What's next in my book? More ruffles in time
Makin Pac and Jay lapse in a line a revise
Bringin Biggie to meet Marshall in a rhyme I designed
It's finally mine the goosebumps are back on my hands
So I step back to show you where I actually stand
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Re: Writer's Block

Postby MC Anonymous » Jun 8th, '09, 18:25

Damn damn damn. Finally I've been waiting for some James R dopeness. Great job man. Only complaint I have is your wordplay wasn't 100% there.. probably 85-90%. Still it's fucking great! :y: :y:
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Re: Writer's Block

Postby D'Leh » Jun 8th, '09, 18:27

damn.. nice lyrics man... i've some songs too, but my english has to be better, if you want i can pm you with som
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Re: Writer's Block

Postby mcZu » Jun 8th, '09, 18:28

Considering you just got out of your writers block, it's fucking dope.

Flow was on-point and the lyrics were dope.

Nice job.

And thanks for the shout out lol, 5 Star Generalsss!
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Re: Writer's Block

Postby Steve Spag » Jun 8th, '09, 19:41

Dope shit bro. I really feel the emotion you put into it, and what was great was it didn't affect your perfect rhyme-scheme's whatsoever. The flow was awesome man, was really feelin' it at some points where your multi's came in, sounded beautifully in my head, lol. Great piece bro, but you need to get up on the mic!
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Re: Writer's Block

Postby James R. » Jun 8th, '09, 21:00

Thanks everybody for checkin this shit out I appreciate the kind words and support. UPPIN!
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Re: Writer's Block

Postby JMG » Jun 8th, '09, 21:10

that was dope as fuck
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Re: Writer's Block

Postby Spyder » Jun 8th, '09, 22:00

dam dude great shit man, flow and multies were excellent glad to see ur back in the business.....cuz we got another song to do :shifty:
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Re: Writer's Block

Postby James R. » Jun 8th, '09, 22:01

thanks JMG

lol aight Spyder just lemme know when
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Re: Writer's Block

Postby Spyder » Jun 8th, '09, 22:04

ight dude
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Re: Writer's Block

Postby Solace » Jun 9th, '09, 02:16

That was really good man, as everybody else already said. Damn I loved your rhyme-schemes and the flow of this piece. Glad that you're outta writer's block. Those multies were excellent too James. The way you put this shit out, it's just a great comeback. As Spag said, you gotta get on the mic :y:
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Re: Writer's Block

Postby Young Luc » Jun 9th, '09, 02:33

great stuff james... lyrics are hot, i guess that explains why yur username is red. lol
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Re: Writer's Block

Postby Ka0t1c » Jun 9th, '09, 04:42

very nice, now i expect you to write more...and more...and more, peace :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Writer's Block

Postby Fa-Q » Jun 9th, '09, 05:19

damn man...good shit...respect's given
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Re: Writer's Block

Postby Tash8 » Jun 9th, '09, 07:07

not really feelin it, idk just seemed really forced to me... not in the sense of rhymed force but the verses were (or the three verses combined into one) just eehh idk how to explain but this was not a good song at least compared to shit i've seen u do before.
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