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Cruise Freestyle (Written)

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Cruise Freestyle (Written)

Postby mcZu » Jun 11th, '09, 14:51

I was on a cruise, and someone I know was bumping Respect My Conglomerate.
He challenged me to write something quick on that beat (5 min).
So I did, and it came out pretty well considering that 5 min is kinda short lol.
Feed is appreciated.

This is what I came up with (written in those 5 min):

Talking ‘bout filling bodies with numbers, who you?
The only things you’ll ever fill are a couple Sudoku’s
So due, to the super supper feast for two and pro-tools
Emcee Zu-is supposed to hammer these lame fools
With thunder running around like shoes.....that’s hummer like cool
The feast ends in a beast run in with mo’ class than summer school
So I introduce.... ya’ll the mighty sultan with a pen
Produce mo’ bars than Nestlé eating Martians, and
Deduce mo’ thought strings than Sherlock’s genius brain scans
Red colors when I pull the strings like a period having R. Hood
So ‘.............Erry body are hood?..................’
‘Wass good?’ Apparently a battle in the hood.... So, so
I leave ya shooked in a duel, only a pen no twin fo’ fo’s
Ya’ll got Flinstone fuel, me? .....I’m a BMW twin turbo
Both feat on the ground, surrounded with earth sounds
This aint no earthquake shake shaking the ground now
It’s an art-quake shake starting to levitate the crowd
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
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