Something new

[BILI]

Here`s something new,tips please.Yesterday I started to write and I am really beginning to like it.


I`m flowing crazy like the Amazon river
Its so fuckin dope the way that I deliver
And I`ll attack any MC that attacks me
CUT HIM IN PIECES,please relax G
I won`t relax now I`m really pissed
I think its time to put out some fucked up twist
Its time to terminate him,his dismissed
And make sure that he`ll never exist.

[Spyder]

its alright especially if your just startin off. i say make the structure long so u can fit more shit in it and use more multies and word play. u only had "attacks me" and "relax G" as multies

[BILI]

thx for the tips homie