should i continue this?

[Ka0t1c]

i aint got to say much to prove that everyday i'm on the move
cuz as soon as i wake up i just want to display a new tune
so i won't go bankrupt or make any pay cuts, i must stay in my room
there's no way i can shake from this annoying cacoon
until i take off like i'm going to the moon
maybe it's chaos but i enjoy being a loon
my name is Kevin McCoy and i'm deploying to wound
destroy and to ruin anybody if it's human, whether a boy or a girl...

well how could i, help me out because i'm really a good guy
for now, tell me goodbye because i'm on my one-way route to hell
oh, my time is countin down, will i die, i'm not proud, but why should i
be livin my life like this, i'm givin them my 2 cents

[Slim Zaddy]

i liked it man ,, keep it up ,, you had some good line s,,

[Ka0t1c]

thanx, i will fix this up a bit then