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Peep this (Deep Shit!) ock feel Me? "not Really"...

Postby J Roc » Jun 17th, '09, 07:03

ACTUALLY ... TWO TIMES i PRACTICALLY SHOOT GUYS
And "Stop These Kids" Like I'm ... HAVING MY TUBES TIED!!!
Ya'll In The Forums MAD AT A FRUIT PIE
Making fun of a kid - i think SAC IS A COOL GUY
i'll fuck ya girl then leave her ass a BASKETBALL HOOP SIZE
SETTLE WITH LIFE ... You Got coke? Get some MENTHOL & BITE!!
or My Gun'll Make u "Flip Over" Like when i PEDDLE MY BIKE
I'm on the SEASIDE Making PEACE SIGNS Right After The HEAT FLYS
Then stare in a mirror and Say Bloody Mary THREE TIMES
Got 3 Different Cases of SYPHILIS Cuz i don't GIVE A SHIT
The Doctor Diagnosed Me with DIZZYNESS
so i put a patch-on And Smoked a Pack-of CIGARETTES
Then They Told me to take a chill pill so i OD'd on RITALIN
"Why u BEATING ME UP J?? Ya Girl think's u fat ,She's LEAVING U CUPCAKES"
Told him i was only like this Cuz i Gained 30 Pounds EATING FROM SUBWAY^^
My GIRLS A WHORE? DAMN ...So why i'm paying her TRIPLE THESE DORKS HAVE??
I don't care though i already blew her off to play WORLD OF WARCRAFT
I'm QUITE NICE AND - i LIKE FIGHTING ur Left side hurts cuz i'm RIGHT SIDED
I'm crazy, if Holding-MIc's I'm Obie-Trice , The Only-Type To Bite the Ear off MIKE TYSON
SWALLOW THE POINT PILLS I'll make u Plant ALL OF THE SOIL
I'm just getting the Rust off - I'm a BOTTLE OF OIL

I'm outtttaaa Ittt
Last edited by J Roc on Jun 18th, '09, 00:14, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Peep this (Deep Shit!) ock feel Me? "not Really"...

Postby Fa-Q » Jun 17th, '09, 08:34

damn dude serious multis but kinda random
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Re: Peep this (Deep Shit!) ock feel Me? "not Really"...

Postby J Roc » Jun 18th, '09, 00:14

haha i know i was Out of it when i wrote this shit .
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Re: Peep this (Deep Shit!) ock feel Me? "not Really"...

Postby gutawafang » Jun 18th, '09, 02:43

This is cool man and the flow was damn fucking on spot. I liked it man. I feel ya. :y:
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Re: Peep this (Deep Shit!) ock feel Me? "not Really"...

Postby lilrossy » Jun 19th, '09, 03:41

:worship: :worship: Dude, i fuckin love this verse right here! had some really good lines in there, made me smile a couple of times. Good shit man, keep it up. :y: :y:
"Too fatal, unable to crash
Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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Re: Peep this (Deep Shit!) ock feel Me? "not Really"...

Postby gutawafang » Jun 20th, '09, 12:04

I happened to reread this. And I REALLY love this line:
Then stare in a mirror and Say Bloody Mary THREE TIMES :y:
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