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A Militia Man

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A Militia Man

Postby Rain Matrix » Jun 20th, '09, 19:30

hell is making it's home On Earth as we move Onwards I feel like a suicide Bomber
typing up the Wrong Words unable to live with all this Dishonor any Longer

oh so Soon this world end with a Boom every living soul will be Consumed
deathly Tunes echo off the Moon cuz there isn't anymore Room for a Tomb

leaving a Major Crater it's gonna turn bodies to Vapors take that Haters
it'll feel like a billion Razors raining down on the Fakers and the Traitors

so Arm A Weapon for Armageddon cuz Harm Is Destined to Find You
that's why it's Time To Rhyme True like your sick from the Swine Flu

is it a sign to start Killing Pigs tell me who the Villian Is Chillin With
are our hearts Still In This cuz empty graves seem to be Filling Quick

that's why I stand Ready like they'll never Get Me I'm straight Paranoid
in my head There's A Voice saying don't let it Scare Ya Boy Share The Joy

before the Epic War were Headed For we have to get ourselves Untangled
their programmings on every Channel can't you see were becoming the Example

so load up your Ammo and prepare to leave um Mangled if they take the Gamble
I'll be a modern day Rambo decked out in Camo fuck um all this shit is Handled
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Re: A Militia Man

Postby Arabian Shady » Jun 21st, '09, 13:27

nice to see you here man, not your best verse, flow was okay, little hard to find tho, rhyming was complex-which is pure rain matrix :y:
well written , needs a couple of tweaks tho
Peace

best line

so Arm A Weapon for Armageddon cuz Harm Is Destined to Find You
that's why it's Time To Rhyme True like your sick from the Swine Flu
ArAbIaN ShAdY


We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
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