*James R, Chett Star, and the gay bar!!!

[noel]

Very funny- waits for Chet Star and James R to post...

[heva]

lol it's funny..even tho you rhyme francisco and disco a lot

[Slovinec]

Sac's back listening to frisco rap
Rappin 4 tay oh this shit is fat
cruisin in his tinted corolla car
Stops in the mission hits the bar
Wow I think I really did drive to far....
Just realized I wasn't fitted for this disco
Maybe I'm in the wrong part of san francisco
I get kicked out I yell I'm a superstar
Wait! Something just seemed really bizarre!
Yes I'm insane Yes my raps lame
Yes I know all my versus are all the dam same
But this is SERIOUS I aint got time for more GAMES
Sac know what he saw is the truth
Fuck I took a pic wit my iphone for proof
Who are these two?
Oh I know WHO
EWWW! DO I really know these 2?
Oh NO! it's Chet STAR
playing pocahontas with James RRR!
SHIT! What was I doing in the faggot BAR?
I wasn't in mission I'm in the CASTRO (*gay*) community
Even a person like I don't have a strong enough immunity
for these places, full of nut cases, tons of ass rapers
Chet why are you giving him head when he has a disease
Here take my magnetic ring and bend down on your knees
Mise well give him my ring as your official engagement
you lose it send me $45 I send you another one as a REPLACEMENT
Enjoy Enjoy! And I know I'm not playin! I really saw this it's all I'm sayin!

this is so shitty, this shitty korean rap u have here can be smelled from ages away. Keep repping San F. it has the one of the highest gay towns,city,, And i like how u put in other peoples names to cover up your relationship with alex chinc

[James R.]

Lmfao that was possibly the stupidest song I've ever read. Your writing skills are on par with a retarded kindergartner eating macaroni and cheese. This was like what would happen if a 90 year old man masturbated violently on a keyboard. You're the equivalent of Sarah Palin and Ron Paul being thrust into a coffin together with nothing to do except fuck on top of a notebook. A notebook you later read and copied into a word file and posted online. To say it simply, you're less valuable than the acid from yesterdays raunchy grope session between two drunken, underage high schoolers in the back of an old school Chevy Van.

[J Roc]

Lmfao that was possibly the stupidest song I've ever read. Your writing skills are on par with a retarded kindergartner eating macaroni and cheese. This was like what would happen if a 90 year old man masturbated violently on a keyboard. You're the equivalent of Sarah Palin and Ron Paul being thrust into a coffin together with nothing to do except fuck on top of a notebook. A notebook you later read and copied into a word file and posted online. To say it simply, you're less valuable than the acid from yesterdays raunchy grope session between two drunken, underage high schoolers in the back of an old school Chevy Van.

Lmao! He Paint's a Picture Dosen't He?

"Ya'll in the forums MAD AT A FRUIT PIE
Saying shit to a kid - i think SAC IS A COOL GUY"

- My Newest Drop In Creative Writing .. hahaha

[MC Anonymous]

Lmfao that was possibly the stupidest song I've ever read. Your writing skills are on par with a retarded kindergartner eating macaroni and cheese. This was like what would happen if a 90 year old man masturbated violently on a keyboard. You're the equivalent of Sarah Palin and Ron Paul being thrust into a coffin together with nothing to do except fuck on top of a notebook. A notebook you later read and copied into a word file and posted online. To say it simply, you're less valuable than the acid from yesterdays raunchy grope session between two drunken, underage high schoolers in the back of an old school Chevy Van.

*inhales*
That shit was wacker then what would happen if you came hard and masturbated shit through your penis hole. That rhyme scheme was so bit it looked like 1000 mice nibbled all over the paper you were reading off of as you typed it to wordpad. The flow was horrible, the scheme you used was wack. You could have had a better chance selling those immortality rings to Jesus Christ. You are a garbage salesman, and a writer. You're only sales-pitch is when you're fishing on an ocean and a sudden gust of wind hits you. Fuck outta here.

[J Roc]

I love it when you hate on me! I know the flow is SOO bad! it's the worst flow ever! it's not even rap! it's just saying hipidy hoo haaa!! blah blah blah James R is a faggot. hah hah! Im so good at making the best wackidy wack rap! haha! the more u HATE on me the better!!!

All asian's look the same

[James R.]

Coming from the guy who has Eminem with an ass in his face as an avatar. The same guy who wanted to fuck a tranny and begged her to tell his little message board that she wasn't a tranny. You're a fucking homo to the Nth fucking degree. You're gayer than man on man anal sex watching Brokeback Mountain while eating chocolate fondue fawning over your Julia Roberts posters.

[James R.]

Suck it up bitch

[JMG]

Chet why are you giving him head when he has a disease
Here take my magnetic ring and bend down on your knees
Mise well give him my ring as your official engagement
you lose it send me $45 I send you another one as a REPLACEMENT
Enjoy Enjoy! And I know I'm not playin! I really saw this it's all I'm sayin!

ether

[Tranquil]

Man, to tell you the truth, i actully liked it, lol, u just came up with random shit, yer it wasent the best, but your getting better, give it a year or two, and you will have the flow figured out, the dilivery figured out, and u will be album to put words together better,

[imarun10]

That was too funny!

[gutawafang]

They are rhymes that are quite random. But it's good that when you try to write, you stay focused on the topic. You don't swerve. But really, you need more practice bro.

[Slimm]

Lmao im sorry chet and james but this part made me lol:

Chet why are you giving him head when he has a disease
Here take my magnetic ring and bend down on your knees

Apart from that it was horrible, james and chetty FTW.