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Postby J Roc » Jun 22nd, '09, 17:53

My GUNS PRESENT And Everything u Spit is UNPLEASANT
i'll be done in ONE SECOND , You can't beat me? then COME SECOND
I Need SERVICE, MAID . The Line Above Was a TURTLE RACE .
[[A Message From James R]] "CHECK IT GUY! I Just Had to RECOGNIZE Ur SEXY LINES
i think you should know that EVERYTIME, u post in the forums i'm always WETTING MY..NEVERMIND
But i just wanna thank you cuz i always "ROC" TO THIS MUSIC & im "ROCING" THESE SHOES BITCH
And Crack "ROC" ISNT USELESS .. i walked in sand , omg, i have "ROCS" IN MY SHOE PRINTS!!!!!
J UR FICKLE .. bye tho i just wanted to say i think its kinda cool we share the SAME INITIALS" [Beep]
That AINT A DISS u can BANK ON IT
Who on TR Ever been as GREAT AS THIS?
I Guess "Son Set" if these LAMES WILL SEND HIM THE "HEAT"
& If your Mad-Today send bullets "After-J" Like ... K L M N O P!!!

Ez!
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Postby DelinQuent » Jun 22nd, '09, 18:13

i thought you were gone... and what does GUNS PRESENT have to do with someone spitting UNPLEASANT... looks like someone is just digging for rhymes.
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Postby J Roc » Jun 22nd, '09, 18:15

DelinQuent wrote:i thought you were gone... and what does GUNS PRESENT have to do with someone spitting UNPLEASANT... looks like someone is just digging for rhymes.

What was your first clue? it wasn't supposed to be connected . i liked how it flowed and it's MY Piece . lightwork or not . u got a problem? up your level before u come at a boss .
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Postby DelinQuent » Jun 22nd, '09, 18:34

ok sir, have a good day :y:
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Postby Ka0t1c » Jun 27th, '09, 01:03

funny... the never mind part was best.
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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