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The Writer’s Mind (N.E.W)

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The Writer’s Mind (N.E.W)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jun 23rd, '09, 16:29

hope you liked it , feedback is appreciated

A headache… after contemplating, as it keeps fighting itself
Brain damage… after too many letters keep striking it’s cells
A conflict… nouns & verbs slowly draw swords, step foot at war
The pain inside… since more words hit his mind than books at stores
The masterpiece that hides… still incomplete, it’s glory ain’t lit
A state… where the sound of it’s wisdom eruptin’ only exists
It needs to blow, although everything’s ready, yet it lacks the roads
So great, it can tell tales that the art of Van Gogh haven’t told
Peace revolves around it, never wonders if it should fall or flee
‘Cause to be in a world of freedom… a pen & paper is all it needs
It never learned, only taught… and will be rewarded in the after life
Since it has an imagery that can rise to draw……… paradise
Definitely respected by all…… no doubt it’s appreciated
By the fact it has the creativity to create……. The uncreated
A diamond, it is… would never fall into ashes, or hit dust
‘Cause what it has done, was the last phase of what God wanted to give us
I speak about the wise minds… not the fake identities that lie
Since wise minds left a greater affect on us… than centuries of life
Rappers’ minds are writers, poets, lyricists… how u want to rate it
Now finally, I just proved my point…… Rappers are the Greatest
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Re: The Writer’s Mind (N.E.W)

Postby D'Leh » Jun 23rd, '09, 17:45

man...nice lyrics go deep in rappers mind
nice work!!!
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Re: The Writer’s Mind (N.E.W)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jun 24th, '09, 14:25

zurditoshady wrote:man...nice lyrics go deep in rappers mind
nice work!!!


thanks homie , happy you liked it ,, this time i tryed to do something different , ..
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Postby Slim Zaddy » Jun 27th, '09, 13:34

bump :angry:
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