Fa-Q - Mysogynistic (Throw away song)

[Fa-Q]

This is a throwaway song off my album. Decided not to put it cause, i dont know kind of weird and it might deter people that are casual listeners. Especially Girls

When I crawled out the womb like a spider
I dont think my moms pussy had any room to get wider <--Before Em
But I guess I was wrong
sittin in my room while her dates pressin his bulge on her thong <--Hate that fuckin line
I hear fuckin and moans in the next room
groans and sex til noon
as he bones and wrecks her womb
this is the kinda guy that marks his tally
he shoulda fucked her in some dark alley
reflecting on my past
while this ex pornstars gettin a erect in her ass
but the effect is fast
cause he up and leaves and my fathers's no better
its been 17 years and he didnt even bother for a letter
so is my mother the source
naw theres another of course

Mysogynistic-Fuck girls all theyll do is hurt you
Mysogynistic-flirt with you and flip theyre skirt up at you
Mysogynistic-so heres the reason
Mysogynistic-all these fuckin bitches are doing is teasin <--on a side note I FUCKIN HATE THIS CHORUS

I met a little red head
she liked me even for my brittle bed head
So now im starting to like her more
that was only cemented when she asked if I like Paulie Shore
Its christmas and he get in a huge fight
shes callin me pussy and a scrooge tonight
the next day I go and read the signals her breast send
but shes gettin smashed in pigtails by my best friend
shes giving a blowjob in her warm mouth
so I turn the low knob and storm out
I dont know what hurt
walkin on the streets seein a girl in a low cut skirt
as i sit and wonder is she a ho, slut or flirt
I bet her parents didnt raise her right
I bet for days they fight
unknowing that slutty slutty bang bang prays at night
So what next
find the shallowest bitch show my gut and flex
ad for six months have nuttin' but sex
watch a girl cruise up in high heals
shell hurt you thinkin every bruise and lie heals
but you lose and every sigh steals
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(part of the third verse)
I have no memory of my better half
cause shes cheating gettin wetter than a raft

I ended up hating this song cause I focused on the lyrics and multis instead of content. Plus I couldnt get a fuckin hook that I like. I might still do a song like this and this is the roughest possible copy

[classthe_king]

Yeah i can see why this was a throw away song, i didn't really like it at all. It was all over the place i couldn't follow it at all and as you said the content wasn't very good.

[Slim Zaddy]

actually i liked it ,, but it can be done better , but good try ,, and try to fix the structure and use more multies and in-rhyems , so it could flow better ,, it's okay for the 1st try ,, just keep practice , ,, keep it up